my first song!

[visionary432]

i started playing my guitar 2 months ago. my brother and i decided to record our first real song about a week ago. we finished it in a couple of days. i play guitar and he plays bass. everything in it is made by us, including the effects. the instruments we dont play were done on the computer. i think it grows on you with repeat viewings. its a commentary on vietnam... what do you think?

http:/fire.prohosting.com/penz/skip.zip

[Immortal-Cry]

who plays bass? 

[DOASHK]

  what were they thinkin man.

[DOASHK]

im sorry but this is is the most absurd piece of of shiznit ive ever heard its insanely disgusting me and my freind frud truck are listening to it and laughing are hyenas off good job 

[D]

im gonna give u an honest review here


the music is pretty cool actually

how did u do the madagascar like quotes at the end?


u have potential no doubt
i mean that song isnt gonna be very many people's cup of tea but if u dig it, go with it, if u love it and think its great then it is great

dont let people discourage u from makin music and record what u love and what's inside u

never chase something u arent, stay true to yourself and the music will be fine

theres an audience for everything


the music was psychadelic and cool

the whispery vocals and all that arent my cup of tea but was still interesting

[journey]

I like it. It's very entertaining. 

[Sakib]

extremely odd!i'm confused. it's bizarre. basically, its brilliant!

[JezusDontSuf]

Visionary432,

  You're probably not on this board anymore but on the slight chance you'll see this I just want to say I'm sorry for acting like a douche. I was DOASHK on this board back in high school. I was reading through my old posts for kicks, saw this thread and I'm pretty embarrassed. I would have been a sophomore at the time I posted this, which was too old to be acting like a stupid punk. I was going through an extremely rough time in my life, but that's no excuse.
 
  I still remember your song in it's entirety, and it was posted over six years ago so it must have been pretty brilliant. Honestly, I was just jealous that I'm not able to come up with such interesting, abstract musical ideas. I really hope you're still makin' music man.