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Title: My lyrics Post by: mr self destruct on December 04, 2006, 05:20:47 AM Tell me what you think.
Here they are. http://imagineryboy.greatestjournal.com Title: Re: My lyrics Post by: ben9785 on December 04, 2006, 06:10:54 AM thats good stuff, the only criticism id make is that first song "Indifferent song (aka The Unbearable Weight Of Knowing Life Is Indifferent)" the only thing i didn't like about it was the repetition of 'indifferent' multiple times through a verse.. i know it's the running them of the song, and i don't doubt that there could be a way it works when you sing it, but reading it, it just almost became.. i don't want to say annoying..but yeah, persistent rather.. i don't know if it makes sense
but i really enjoyed the rest keep up the great work Title: Re: My lyrics Post by: D on December 04, 2006, 06:35:56 AM Tell me what you think. Here they are. http://imagineryboy.greatestjournal.com Great lyrics, have u put them to music yet? |