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Title: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: W 23 AXL II on March 16, 2007, 02:57:35 PM Im not sure if this belongs here, but times are somewhat slow as we wait for the album release. So anyway....I teach, and this is a student of mine, she's 18yrs old, and really likes GNR. She's dying to hear some reactions, as its going to be performed at a show at the school in exactly TWO WEEKS!
I'm playing guitar in it as well. Its also a half-step up, from Eb to E....so in total, it sounds alittle sharp from the original. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186344 just click on the hi-fi link Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: Soori on March 16, 2007, 03:03:20 PM ITS OKKKKKKKKKKKKKK : ok:
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: EFISH on March 16, 2007, 03:04:20 PM Not bad at all. : ok:
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: JimBobJoeJackJr on March 16, 2007, 03:05:15 PM First of all that effect that sounds like it's doubling her voice was irritating.
Second, during the breakdown her voice gives out. Third, if you played any of the guitars on that blatant karaoke recording, I'd blow you Forth, the last few lines of vocals were terrible. Sorry, tell her to pick another song. Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: Verse Chorus Verse on March 16, 2007, 03:05:53 PM Waaaay too fuckin' poppy.
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: daviebuckethead on March 16, 2007, 03:06:54 PM i think she'll sound much better live, is recorded kinda like it would do her jutice y'know.......maybe lose the double tracked vocal?
she sounds good on the chorus, but loses it towards the end........sorry. guitar tone is good Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: W 23 AXL II on March 16, 2007, 03:07:08 PM First of all that effect that sounds like it's doubling her voice was irritating. Second, during the breakdown her voice gives out. Third, if you played any of the guitars on that blatant karaoke recording, I'd blow you Forth, the last few lines of vocals were terrible. Sorry, tell her to pick another song. i played the lead guitar in the track, its a rhythm track with no lead guitar.....i recorded the guitar at home, and the vocals at school. Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: spyder8739 on March 16, 2007, 03:24:23 PM Well, I'm pretty sensative to pitch, and if she's going to do the duet'ish sound, she should do a harmony part, not the exact same notes, and do them in tune... Besides that, pretty good.
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: estrangedpaul on March 16, 2007, 03:47:00 PM What a perverted thread title :hihi:
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: Grouse on March 16, 2007, 05:58:16 PM What a perverted thread title :hihi: Haha that just cracked me up..... :hihi: Anyway track is ok, except for the annoying double voice track... Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: chineseroses on March 16, 2007, 08:24:19 PM I think she'll do great at the show at her school, providing that double vocal effect isn't there.
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: AXL 20 on March 17, 2007, 02:52:54 PM yuck
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: SLCPUNK on March 17, 2007, 04:26:40 PM Not too shabby, tell her good job.
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: TheMole on March 18, 2007, 02:07:47 PM I'm ok with the dubbing, but do it in the same key/octave instead of this.
Also, in the parts like the one in bold: "She's got eyes of the bluest skies", she sings a slightly different note on both dubbing tracks. That is a definitive nono. I'm pretty sure she can sing this convincingly but the dubbing kills it on this recording. Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: 25 on March 22, 2007, 05:21:04 AM She has pretty clear problems when the melody requires her to go from higher to lower notes. Maybe it's just out of her range? I'd raise the pitch a step or two and see how that works out. She has quite an acceptable poppy voice otherwise.
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: Hoosier on April 09, 2007, 01:13:21 PM its not bad for what it is, but i really dont like what it is. too poppy and girly. the music sounds good though.
Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: estebanf on April 09, 2007, 01:15:38 PM What a perverted thread title :hihi: LOL!! :rofl: I thought the same Title: Re: Teenage girl does Sweet Child Post by: Danny Top Hat on April 20, 2007, 06:53:22 AM I thought she was playing lead, but it's you.? Good job! : ok:
Her rhythm is good, it'll be great for a school talent show.? I dunno how old she is but maybe her voice just needs to mature a bit - it's kinda lacking now but probably will get better.? Tell her to just go with it and enjoy herself - and get really drunk beforehand! ;D Love the thread title btw! |