My lyrics

[mr self destruct]

Tell me what you think.

Here they are.

http://imagineryboy.greatestjournal.com

[ben9785]

thats good stuff, the only criticism id make is that first song "Indifferent song (aka The Unbearable Weight Of Knowing Life Is Indifferent)" the only thing i didn't like about it was the repetition of 'indifferent' multiple times through a verse..  i know it's the running them of the song, and i don't doubt that there could be a way it works when you sing it, but reading it, it just almost became.. i don't want to say annoying..but yeah, persistent rather.. i don't know if it makes sense

but i really enjoyed the rest keep up the great work

[D]

Tell me what you think.

Here they are.

http://imagineryboy.greatestjournal.com

Great lyrics, have u put them to music yet?