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Title: Lyrics I wrote, song is called "World" Post by: DnR on April 26, 2012, 06:13:32 PM Look at the people look at how there fighting This makes me sick inside That this world has come to this (slowly bulid ochestra violin, with piano) How could this world come to this. It started off with peace and love and now its all about war and hate These days all we hear is bad news Rather than good makes me wonder what the fuck is going on. (guitar changes from acoustic into heavy) Why cant we all find that little bit of peace we all have inside of us maybe the world would be a better place if we could all find that bit of peace in us. Maybe we could loook at tomorrow in a better light than what where looking at now. Can we forgive those people who pulled the soul right out of the earth and those people who have loved and cared for the world why do we keep treating them like dirt of the earth. And now cant we forgive these people Who have destroyed this world maybe with abit of help they can see we can change this world for better and we can have more good news rather than bad news. ahhhhhh tell these people, that they would not save anyone but when it comes to them maybe they would see it in a diffrent light. And when disaster strikes Would we all be the ones that could save the world Could we reunite and put our diffreces That destroyed this world If I thought everyone was crazy Maybe now ill find out the truth (guitar solo number 2) Now a cheap investigation To find out all these dealings that the noone can understand that leads to death of innocent people and noone will no exactly the truth because we all know that the world isnt full of peace just like it should be should be should be *whisper* should be *bass solo, slowly building to acoustic guitar" Oh How could it get like this Surely this isnt what we wanted and why cant we all just get along........ "slow build up to heavy guitar" Ohhhh because this place has just gone full of government influence that we cannot change even with full investigations noone will ever know the truth about this world. Opinions? :) Title: Re: Lyrics I wrote, song is called "World" Post by: BluesGNR on April 26, 2012, 10:51:29 PM Don't quit your day job :rofl:
Title: Re: Lyrics I wrote, song is called "World" Post by: Gunnerfan23 on April 27, 2012, 05:09:44 PM The words "read" ok dude.
But constructively it's flowing more like a poem the way you've written it. Without the Melody the words don't stand on their own (but it seems you have a concrete idea happening there with all the parts laid out with production notes) :) Record something with an acoustic guitar. After of course, doing all the legal mumbo-jumbo to ensure your stuff doesn't get ripped off. Don't quit your day job, but keep that hope alive!!!! :D RNFNR!!!! GNR4LYF! Title: Re: Lyrics I wrote, song is called "World" Post by: KeyserSoze on July 27, 2012, 11:27:03 AM Sounds like a speech Axl might make before singing Civil War :hihi:
Title: Re: Lyrics I wrote, song is called "World" Post by: GNRreunioneventually on July 27, 2012, 01:32:22 PM Oooooohh ooh I got one :P
It's a parody of disturbed down with the sickness- Your momma came up from being down on my dick-ness She took off her panties N' I was down with her thick-ness Turns out though she wasn't down with my quickness Two weeks later she contracted a sickness I asked her if it was before she road my dick-ness She said yeah now we're down with the syphilis |