that was rockin!
i hear tonnes of slash in that lead playing which is never a bad thing.
however, the main riff sounds a little thin.? maybe double tracking it or doubling it with a track an octave above it would make it seem fuller if you ever turned that into a proper recording.
ok i'll shutup.
it rocked
Heh-heh, yeah Slash is a big influence on me for sure.
The main riff is doubled, if you listen on the left the guitar is less distorted and played more straight ahead. On the right there's a more distorted guitar playing a lot of pinch harmonics and in an overall more sleazy style if that makes sense. It probably sounds on the thin side because I used the amp simulators built into GarageBand. It was after midnight when I recorded so I couldn't mic a real amp.
Thanks for listening and thanks for the critique!