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« on: January 28, 2003, 04:11:36 PM »

 Hey,
  I have a lot of poems and songs I've wrote, but, I never share them with anyone. I'm sure other people on this board have stuff they have written, so, why not share it with people on this board, I'll start! This is a poem I wrote about 2 years ago. Tell me what you think, be brutally honest, I won't get mad.
                 -Justin [peace]



It feels good to be alive,

I know this because sometimes the taste of your own tears is better than the finest wine. Some times the weight of the world on your shoulders is better than the freedom and happiness that luxury can provide.

Sometimes if you stay out in the sunshine too long you get burnt. The same fact goes with life.

I've heard that you should always wrap your arms around the people that you love. Somehow over the last 2 years I haven't been able to wrap my arms around myself. Sometimes out of shame, sadness, and the darkness of depression you learn to see light that's at the end of the tunnel. I think that light at the end of the tunnel is really just our hopes and dreams.

I believe our dreams are like seeds, our effort is like water, and with no water the seeds aren't ever going to grow. I learned its better to stick to your own garden than to try to help someone else work on theirs. Especially people who won't appreciate the help.

Sometimes I wish touches that give you that warm feeling inside your stomach were lifelong promises of commitment, but, I've realized that the world doesn't work that way. People don't live by promises they make; they live the way they breathe. Now I know why the air is so polluted. I've learned that promises are no more than a combination of words you can look up in a dictionary.

Give me a grain of sand for every promise I've heard that has been broken, I'll take you too a beach I named deceit. We can swim in the ocean I named sorrow. Hand in hand.

It feels good to be alive.

                             


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« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2003, 06:36:13 PM »

Hey,
  I have a lot of poems and songs I've wrote, but, I never share them with anyone. I'm sure other people on this board have stuff they have written, so, why not share it with people on this board, I'll start! This is a poem I wrote about 2 years ago. Tell me what you think, be brutally honest, I won't get mad.
                 -Justin [peace]



It feels good to be alive,

I know this because sometimes the taste of your own tears is better than the finest wine. Some times the weight of the world on your shoulders is better than the freedom and happiness that luxury can provide.

Sometimes if you stay out in the sunshine too long you get burnt. The same fact goes with life.

I've heard that you should always wrap your arms around the people that you love. Somehow over the last 2 years I haven't been able to wrap my arms around myself. Sometimes out of shame, sadness, and the darkness of depression you learn to see light that's at the end of the tunnel. I think that light at the end of the tunnel is really just our hopes and dreams.

I believe our dreams are like seeds, our effort is like water, and with no water the seeds aren't ever going to grow. I learned its better to stick to your own garden than to try to help someone else work on theirs. Especially people who won't appreciate the help.

Sometimes I wish touches that give you that warm feeling inside your stomach were lifelong promises of commitment, but, I've realized that the world doesn't work that way. People don't live by promises they make; they live the way they breathe. Now I know why the air is so polluted. I've learned that promises are no more than a combination of words you can look up in a dictionary.

Give me a grain of sand for every promise I've heard that has been broken, I'll take you too a beach I named deceit. We can swim in the ocean I named sorrow. Hand in hand.

It feels good to be alive.

                             




i thought it was good! i liked it...however, the only critisisim i have is that it switches moods too much.  at the beginning its kind of happy and content, but then you get sort of violent and angry and by the end i just wound up sorta confused. but other than that i liked it [ok]
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« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2003, 07:17:48 PM »



I've heard that you should always wrap your arms around the people that you love. Somehow over the last 2 years I haven't been able to wrap my arms around myself. Sometimes out of shame, sadness, and the darkness of depression you learn to see light that's at the end of the tunnel. I think that light at the end of the tunnel is really just our hopes and dreams.
                           



wow i really think that that frase is very cool specially this "Somehow over the last 2 years I haven't been able to wrap my arms around myself" i like it.

seb i also like your lyrics . it would be interesting if you tell us the story behind the song.

 i think its very cool to see people that put their way of see things in a poem or in a song or story.

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« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2003, 09:35:52 PM »

Okay, this is like Hippiechick improv, so me not really sure how this is going to go, so uhhh, let's just say this is like Hippiechick Live and Unplugged or something.  Okay here we go:

"Cat Fight"

I'm not a bitch
'Cause that would leave me with little room left to classify you
So until I can suit you with a better name
I will call you on all the things you do

If you have a problem with me
Then tell me to my face
'Cause if you decide to spread lies to my closed eyes
I will be all over your fucking case

I don't know maybe it isn't so much of a girl thing to fight
Put I'm in a pissed off shitty mood
And if you cross me right now I'll punch out your motherfucking lights

If you have a problem with me
Then tell me to my face
'Cause if you decide to spread lies to my closed eyes
I will be all over your fucking case

Therapy sessions can begin in the street
When your relaying your story to the police
On how your ass got violently beat
Just thank your lucky stars that your sorry ass is still in one piece

I can acurately visulaize story time now
Once upon a time would be a better time anyhow
And if I could begin to learn how to control myself
I would have killed you in the first place
Instead of taking all this shit out on everybody else
And not punching the shit out of your face

If you have a problem with me
Then tell me to my face
'Cause if you decide to spread lies to my closed eyes
I will be all over your fucking case

You know I've always had the greatest time
Fucking with your sanity and your piece of mind
How sweet it is for me to dictate to you your fate
You just better hope I change my mind before its to fucking late


Ummm yeah Roll Eyes.  Fucking Rock and motherfucking roll dudes Cheesy.  Okay, I uhh know that was kind of violent and shit, but I just feel like beating the shit out of somebody right now.  Like, not because I'm mad at anybody, I just feel like kicking somebodies ass for the hell of it Roll Eyes.
Okay, I am pissed off at people, 'cause I realize I just couldn't beat the shit out of anybody for the hell of it, unless of course it was for some unexplained sexual reasons, and then I wouldn't consider that fighting but just play time. So I guess this is like Hippiechick hardcore or something [nervous].  

Power to the people's, unless you piss me off and then I will feel the need to kick some ass [hihi].

Peace in the name of play time with sexy people  [peace] Kiss [peace]

Spankies  Kiss
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« Reply #4 on: January 28, 2003, 09:40:35 PM »

Ladies and gentlemen...Hippiechick914! Back with a vengeance!
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« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2003, 09:59:10 PM »

I love Hippie so.....yes I do, yes I do  [yes] Kiss Grin
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« Reply #6 on: January 29, 2003, 05:50:55 AM »

I'll post some of my songs next week.

They'll be copyrighted next week so I can post them freely. Wink
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« Reply #7 on: January 30, 2003, 10:45:12 PM »

Some of my lyrics can be found in the "works" section of my website. Just click the link below and enjoy!  Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2003, 01:58:21 PM »

ok this is a song of my bands called end of the road.

dont you find it funny how winning aint the same without a prize
and why people hold there pride above there lives
the road is winding,but it leads us to the promised place
past hills and valleys,ditches and snares without a trace(whats to come)
come to a cross road,this is where the road becomes a path.
so do we walk on or do we let the world take us back(or do we let the world take us back)

oh weve come to the end of the road,how can we turn back when the whole world has turned to stone
come to the end of the road
oh weve come to the of the road.

if theres a light at the end of the tunnel then how come all i see is black,
every clouds got a silver lining but mine flew away and didnt come back,
and so we walk on trying to get to the othjer side.
ever trying to keep in tact our pride but more importantly our lives.

oh weve come to the end of the road....
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« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2003, 02:33:00 PM »

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« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2003, 02:51:25 PM »

 Hey,
  Good job guys. Keep the poems and songs coming. I like some of the lines of the songs I've read by the people who posted so far! Don't be shy, I'll post another one of mind next monday.
  To the guy who complemented me thanks. The poem I wrote is supposed to be confusing as I was confused when I wrote it. I was in jail for 3 days under intense questioning from Police for drug charges against me. A best friend of mine got caught with a bunch of "E", then said he couldn't rat on the guy, I was the only one who could set up a deal. So, these cops expected me to fuck someone over and I didn't. They held me in jail for three days, so, I had nothing better to do than write. By the way, all charges were dropped, they had no evidence on me. But, I lost a best friend out of the whole situation.
                                               -Justin [peace]
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« Reply #11 on: January 31, 2003, 06:02:11 PM »

But, I lost a best friend out of the whole situation.

that sucks :-(
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« Reply #12 on: January 31, 2003, 06:07:35 PM »

But, I lost a best friend out of the whole situation.

that sucks :-(

 Yeah,
  I mean my friend Ryan was a great friend 99.9% of the time. Then he got caught with 500 pills of E. Told the cops he got them from another friend of mine Wes, but, I was the only one who could give Wes the ok to give more to Ryan.
  Ryan thought I would buy all the cops B.S. about me going to jail and set up a deal with Wes. Instead I told the cops to fuck off, the charges against me got dropped, but, I found out Ryan's true colors. When he has to be held accoutable for the decisions he made he wanted to pass the blame. You don't do that! You take responsibility for what YOU have done.
   -Justin [peace]
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« Reply #13 on: February 02, 2003, 06:58:53 PM »

Tears Of A Cop Under Pressure


I have been where you fear to go...
I have seen what you fear to see...
I have done what you fear to do...
All these things I've done for you.

I am the one you lean upon...
The one you cast your scorn upon...
The one you bring your troubles to...
All these people I've been for you.

The one you ask to stand apart...
The one you feel should have no heart...
The one you call the man in blue...
But I am human just like you.

And through the years I've come to see...
That I'm not what you ask of me...
So take this badge and take this gun...
Will you take it?  Will anyone?

And when you watch a person die...
And hear a battered baby cry...
Then so you think that you can be
All those things you ask of me...?



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« Reply #14 on: February 03, 2003, 05:12:29 AM »

Tears Of A Cop Under Pressure


I have been where you fear to go...
I have seen what you fear to see...
I have done what you fear to do...
All these things I've done for you.

I am the one you lean upon...
The one you cast your scorn upon...
The one you bring your troubles to...
All these people I've been for you.

The one you ask to stand apart...
The one you feel should have no heart...
The one you call the man in blue...
But I am human just like you.

And through the years I've come to see...
That I'm not what you ask of me...
So take this badge and take this gun...
Will you take it?  Will anyone?

And when you watch a person die...
And hear a battered baby cry...
Then so you think that you can be
All those things you ask of me...?



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That was cool, even though I haven't got the best opinion about cops, from personal experience...
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« Reply #15 on: February 03, 2003, 07:46:35 AM »

i once wrote an edited version of november rain that i think probably would go in here. (i edited it to relate to my ride to college every day)
but i seem to have lost it
hhhmmm
maybe my good friend chinese democrat has it
i know i'll ask him

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« Reply #16 on: February 07, 2003, 10:53:31 PM »

This is a really fucked up weird song.  It is about love and everything, but sort of about all types of love, between all types of different people, and relationships in general with people.  When I write stuff I like to leave a lot of room up to interpretation and how other people relate to what I have written.  The moods in this are kind of conflicting, and it is kind of raw and just really pure. Kind of about realizations in a sense, and having to make decisions and shit.  


"Is it Enough"

It's time to see things differently
It's time to change things I feel
It's time to change the future's history
Instead of learning how to accept it and deal.

Do you know me
Then show me
Who I am
Is it a part of you
Or another persons point of view
'Cause I honestly don't give a damn

When it all comes down to it
Its never just about love
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough
Everybody wants something
That there is to little of
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough

Its come to the point where caring seems to not be enough
'Cause all their fake smiles last only a little while
And none of them come out of love

To your face sincerity
Is such a rarity
That it is almost nonexistent as it is
So tell me exactly how you feel
Tell me this

Assure me that you are not hiding behind a mask
That the words you are saying are true
'Cause if I'm going to be willing enough to give up a part of me
Then you need to be willing enough to give up a part of you too

'Cause when you hide from me on the inside
Only to be a different person on the outside
Bitter revenge forms
These feelings I can't hide

Do you know me
Then show me
Who I am
Is it a part of you
Or another persons point of view
'Cause I honestly don't give a damn

When it all comes down to it
Its never just about love
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough
Everybody wants something
That there is to little of
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough

Its come to the point where caring seems to not be enough
'Cause all their fake smiles last only a little while
And none of them come out of love

Love wasn't made to hurt
So why the fuck to you treat people like dirt
Then expect to be treated differently
If your so better than everybody else
Then go and love yourself
'Cause I don't need you loving me

When it all comes down to it
Its never just about love
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough
Everybody wants something
That there is to little of
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough

I have so many things
But the one thing I dream of
'Cause when it all comes down to it
Love is never enough

Okay I feel all like naked and exposed now Embarrassed.  Me going to go and hide in a dark corner.
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« Reply #17 on: February 07, 2003, 11:26:43 PM »

I don't write all that much, I know im not the best at it.
I found this in a notebook and its unfinished, doesnt have a title or anything. its kind of short, and i may change it a bit if i feel like it, but here it goes anyhow..

I know that its hard to find
The love that?s hidden deep inside
You gave your soul I lost my mind
Anger makes emotions blind
You succeed every day
To find something so sweet to say
It makes the hatred go away
Then you?ll leave me behind

And its so hard just to describe
The feelings that I feel for you tonight
You?ll resist me till my dying day
I never thought that it would be this way
No words are fit to shine your light
Though I can go on without you
I?ll find a way to tell myself
Carry on
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« Reply #18 on: February 08, 2003, 01:35:40 AM »

This is a song i wrote like 3 years ago, i felt with a lot of anger inside of me , and i just wanted to blame God for what was happening to me. BUT i took the idea of the lyrics far beyond its meaning. I hope you understand, and after it, i hope you like it!  I would like you  to reply for what Ive posted (lyrics)

thanx!
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WHAT GOD NEVER WANTED TO HEAR
(Lyrics:CCC)


God went on vacations when I needed him
Now he’s back to fix the danger
But now I got some little things to say
Or better hide away from my anger

This is what God never wanted to hear
….and now he’s doing  motherfuckers

Sunday’s church is full of loathsome sinners
They went there to clean therir feelings
But then they go out and do what they want
And bible’s word is on the ceiling

This is what God never wanted to hear
…..and now he’s doing motherfuckers

Pardom me I’ll never do that again
Now you?re fucked you cant be saved
If you’re “so good” why don’t you lend me a hand
Or you’re  just another bad angel

This is what God never wanted to hear
…..and now he’s doing motherfuckers

The rain wet the dry, the laugh destroy the cry
The lies denies the truth and danger
My soul is cheap I’d like to sell it
And you can give me 10 bucks cause I don’t wanna save it

This is what God never wanted to hear
…..and now he’s doing motherfuckers


25-26/10/2000 (date when i wrote it down)
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« Reply #19 on: February 08, 2003, 03:24:38 PM »

here ia great song i wrote: tell me how u like the 1st verse

I come over ur house
every day
for reasons unknown to u
cause u might say
that i am sick

but face the facts
ur mom is fine
oh i everytime i see her
she just blows my mind
i love her hair
i love he eyes
oh iwish i wish
that she was mine
ur mom is hot
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