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« Reply #20 on: February 08, 2003, 05:55:42 PM »

Okay, I don't know what I was thinking about when I wrote this, okay I do, but not in that way guys, well not entirely.  It is a weird song, sort of taken from two perspectives. The first one is from like a little boy relaying to his friends about what a whore his mother is and of all her uhh "extracurricular activities," and service to the community.  The second perspective is still from the same boy, but when he is older.  He is relaying to his uhhh "therapist," about his mom's lifestyle, but also how much he sort of loved his mom too, and the hmm "education" she provided him with.  I wrote this about two years ago while baking Christmas cookies. It is sort of punk rockish and very raw, nasty, and sick.  I know I have issues Cheesy.  

"Mommy Came"

Guess what Guess what
Your mommy told me
Guess what Guess what
My mommy got to see
She told me she slept with your dad
And he's the best that she's ever had
Just guess what guess what your mommy told me
Guess who guess who just did your daddy

I bet you never thought that mommy was that good
All the boys tell me she gives it to them like she should
She's the best mommy on the whole entire block
If you don't know why then that's a complete shock
Just guess what guess what my mommy got to see
Guess who guess who just fucked your daddy
This doesn't really come as a shock
Mommy has slept with the whole entire block
Giving it all out but not for free
Guess what guess what mommy gave your daddy

Maybe she'll visit your house tonight
An daddy will go up inside her an make her feel alright
Everybody deserves enjoyment from somebody
Just guess what guess what your daddy got to see

Oh mommy mommy give some to me
I've been such a good good boy can't you see
I really really need to see you tonight
Oh mommy mommy make me feel alright
Oh mommy can't you see
I'm not just your baby

I guess I guess I guess you just never knew
All the things that mommy could do
I guess I guess you just never knew
All of the people mommy has screwed

'Cause you mommy such a whore
I got up and inside her trap door
And you would just never believe
All the things mommy's done to me
She took me deep inside
And I took her for a test ride
My mommy made me feel soo good
She screwed me up the ass just like she should
Ohh mommy mommy can't you see
I'm not just, not just your baby
I don't need a car to ride
I don't need a house to get inside
I don't need a key
'Cause all you need to do is screw me
Mooooooommmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyy

Ohh mommy I just guess I never knew
All the things, all the things you could do
Oh mommy, oh mommy now I see
Why you are always so busy
Ohhhh mommy I just never knew
All the people you have screwed
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« Reply #21 on: February 10, 2003, 05:08:27 AM »

Shut Up And Pray
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I listened to my God tonight
He couldn't tell what's wrong from right

He knows he fucked up with this world
He thinks he might be getting old

He tried to save me from my sins
To save us from our kings and queens

And then he tried to cure my pain
But in the end he called me insane


Chorus:

It's needless to lie
It's needless to cry
It's needless to try
And fall from the sky

It's needless to say
You'll do it your way
When all you can do
Is shut up and pray
shut up and pray...


2nd Verse:

I listened to my God tonight
But couldn't help him end his light

He said that people shouldn't die
By all those guns they had to buy

He tried to talk me into church
He said "Believe but never search"

But He could see inside my eyes
I knew my truth, I knew His lies...

Repeat Chorus x 3

Closing:

I listen to my God sometimes
Because he always stops my crimes...


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« Reply #22 on: February 10, 2003, 11:33:39 PM »

here ia great song i wrote: tell me how u like the 1st verse

I come over ur house
every day
for reasons unknown to u
cause u might say
that i am sick

but face the facts
ur mom is fine
oh i everytime i see her
she just blows my mind
i love her hair
i love he eyes
oh iwish i wish
that she was mine
ur mom is hot
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« Reply #23 on: February 11, 2003, 06:02:32 PM »

Hey guys this is something ive written.  Sorry if its bad im only 15.


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forget about what they have done
let their lives...live on
and hope that they will be safe
from the world they tried to take

Pray that they r not lost
that their past is not re-crossed
help so that they find a way
so that the sun may shine even on a rainy day

Try 2 undertstand and forgive
so that they can truly live
please let them drink from a pond
instead of being a proton

You made a mistake
the consequences create a heartache
Your life will be lost, either way
black,white,straight, gay
the laws are fair for who ever will dare
to grab and waste
the last breath to give...to taste
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« Reply #24 on: February 12, 2003, 09:15:48 PM »

nice words
i kinda got stuck on the proton line, though
didn't seem to vibe with the rest
to me, anyway
but i dig the lyrics

Hey guys this is something ive written.  Sorry if its bad im only 15.


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forget about what they have done
let their lives...live on
and hope that they will be safe
from the world they tried to take

Pray that they r not lost
that their past is not re-crossed
help so that they find a way
so that the sun may shine even on a rainy day

Try 2 undertstand and forgive
so that they can truly live
please let them drink from a pond
instead of being a proton

You made a mistake
the consequences create a heartache
Your life will be lost, either way
black,white,straight, gay
the laws are fair for who ever will dare
to grab and waste
the last breath to give...to taste
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« Reply #25 on: February 13, 2003, 07:59:02 PM »

This is the shittiest shit ever.. like you cannot get any shittier than this. I can't even tell if its a poem or song.. it could pass for both.. maybe. It rhymes atleast. Man.. I need to evolve in song writing. Seriously. Anyways, this is like my song I took a good five minutes on..j/k. I spent like three hours because I kept getting distracted. It's inspired by me talking to my freind and saying Izzy looked like a rock n' roll mob man..

watch out, here he comes
with his rhythm guitar
a bag slung over his shoulder
headed to the nearest bar

don't run, don't hide
he don't care
he lives his lies
he takes his time

whats that you say?
i cant hear you.
you saw him the other day?
i doubt it.

hes a rock n roll mob man
with jet black hair
smoking his cigarette
without a care

(Yeah its short, but would you really want it to go on any farther?)
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« Reply #26 on: February 14, 2003, 12:26:15 PM »

For the ones who hadn't seen them :
***********************************************

After painful memories and cries
After finally deciding to change it all
After shouting my anger away
There comes the night for a last fall

Intoxicated by this growing pain
Infuriated by the dirtiest of all, fate
Anguished to the thought of all in vain
There I now lie helpless in my bed

Quitting the strong attitude for once
Leaving my arrogance away in sorrow
Trying to understand this last dance
And why there might no be a tomorrow.

Helping myself with words today
Those same words I cannot hear
These little letters to give me delay
The same ones I run from out of fear

One can be a sheep and a coward
Was it worth all the courage after all?
All it takes is a ?god did a fast forward?
And suddenly, a life is erased, total.

Pain grows in the night, I can?t sleep
It?s there at day and all I do is weep
I hope god is there with me today
I want to live another few decades.
*************************************************
Eternally caught up in time, awaiting
My mind going up the same mountain,
Still engraving the same old marbled stones
Carrying this message through my bones.

Guided or lead restricted faith to live
Showed and told to pass the great lines
Feeling or believing in his angry strife
If I fail to show them how to redefine.

Mount Sinai there, Mount Oreb here
7 mountains to save our frail dynasty
Little cave protecting our people here
Until they find the way I called destiny.

Archaeologists from the entire planet today
Historians with a passion, without Greed
People hurrying up to see without delay
All hoping one day they?ll be freed.

Summer time in the mountains is near
Bodies lie there man and wife side by side
Why is it then now that starts my fear?
When all I should feel should be pride?

History will be changing and people with it
Are they only ready to redirect their ways?
Why do I haunt until they finally find it
Isn?t it the way to answer their prayers?

Guided or lead restricted faith to live
Showed and told to pass the great lines
Feeling or believing in his angry strife
If I fail to show them how to redefine.

A piece of a loved one so long gone
All that left is the hope for our people
All that?s there is the only evidence
Why did I have to write ten marbles?
*************************************************
Days of thunder, revenge so bitter
My love has gone , torn into pieces
The world will crumble to my shatter
And forget about ancient deities.

My husband, picking you bit by bit
Egypt is a not big enough for love
A whole life for my craving only legit
You?ll come back and I?ll be mother

They shall crawl towards their queen
You?ll live and through him my fist
You memory never forgotten you Sun
Thunder tears the skys, it?s you I miss

In eternity they?ll pay the price of their deed
We?ll be one for as long as my soul wonders
Until maybe the key unlocks that atrocious lid
Until we find another way to be one forever.
*************************************************
The look in your eyes asking me
Always popping the same question
Trying to blind my sad memory
Never asking about my opinion

I want to melt inside your thoughts
Understand the hidden betrayal
Freak to the invisibles I fought
I want too see you be disloyal

One smile for ten knifes
One kiss for 1000 wives
One word to say sorry
One tear for infidelity

If I could only find those words
That courage to close this door
Just slit your heart with a sword
Throw the pieces of you ashore.

Find the truth to set myself free
Cry a lot until there is no more
Leave all my past behind me
And finally close that door.

One smile for ten knifes
One kiss for 1000 wives
One word to say sorry
One tear for infidelity
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« Reply #27 on: February 17, 2003, 03:56:10 PM »

Hey guys I'm going to post in here because Conny is a bitch. Anyways... this is a song I wrote on 1-17-03 @ 6:32 EST.

The title is still in the air, and when I write most of my songs I write them in 1 draft, I rarely go over them and edit them. So its like a first time thing. Tell me your thoughts on this one.

"Love Took It"

Why does it all feel strange
I'm here at your side
ALl you wanna do is hide from me
How and why are my thoughts
Anger and falling rots through me
Into another place where golden streets glime

Why does it have to be this way
What do I have to do to pay my price
Dig deep into me
Do you see the debt I owe you
Please let me repay it
I once thought with my life but thats the hard way out

I get one shot at life
Life should be with you and only you
Forevr will I extend my arm to grab you from whatever harm is there

I was mad and down
All I felt was tha tyou shut me out
All I thought was is this what she's about
Remorse and alot of anger left just like theft


Your love took it
Shook it (x2)
Your love took it (x2)

Verse 1

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Yeah its weak in a way it does need work so reply please.

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When I speak a piece of my mind
'Cause silence isn't golden
When I'm holding it inside
'Cause I've been where I have been
An I've seen what I have seen
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« Reply #28 on: February 17, 2003, 04:17:30 PM »

I like it very much, it's a lil heartbreaking in a way..

I'm such a sensitive slob.. [hihi]

I'll get back to you once i've read it over a few times..

BTW : i like the other one too [ok]
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« Reply #29 on: February 17, 2003, 05:04:00 PM »

Hey guys I'm going to post in here because Conny is a bitch.

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« Reply #30 on: February 17, 2003, 07:26:06 PM »

please let them drink from a pond
instead of being a proton

i wrote the song about prisoners and how they lose their lives either way...getting killed or spending the rest of their life in a cell.
The first line is saying let them live, because water is a symbol of life.  The second line is about being stuck in a cell because protons are always contained inside a cell.
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« Reply #31 on: February 25, 2003, 02:22:25 AM »

This is the first song I ever wrote.  It was one of those days I was pissed off at everyone (Especially people back home) and I wrote this...

I can't escape
Feeling depressed
Feelings of hate
Slowly grow in my chest
No place to go
Where can these feelings stay
Push them in
Just the same
I don't need you telling me
How to live my life
Please stop giving me
All this pain and strife

I don't need you anymore, leave me alone
I'm sick of how you always piss and moan
Don't try to take away all I've been shown
So please, just leave me alone

Back home you were
My best friend
Now I really feel that
It all did end
You tease me more
Now it brings me down
Stay away from me
Until I leave this town
I'm sick of all the bullshit
That you put me through
I can only hope someday
It all comes back to you

I don't need you anymore, leave me alone
I'm tired of our yelling on the phone
Some day you'll surely reap what you have sown
So please, just leave me alone

Mind your own fucking business
Stop criticizing me
Let me be the person
That I wanna be
Don't try to fucking mould me
Into someone I'm not
If it were up to me
I'd have you taken out and shot

I don't need you anymore, leave me alone
I'm sick of how you always bitch and moan
You are the reason I hate coming home
So please, just leave me alone

Non-conformists?
Ha, yeah right
You are all the same
Under my and others' lights
For being individuals
You sure act a lot alike
Stop being a hypocrite
Get out of the car and on a bike
With the influence of one
The dazed follow her
But I'm not swayed that easily
Even when you said you weren't

I don't need you anymore, leave me alone
You're the lowest level of cowardice, the drones
Don't villainize me cuz I won't put her on a throne
So please, just leave me alone


A little info on some of this... Verse 1 goes to basically everyone back home... Verse 2 to my former best friend... Verse 3 to the leaders of my former church youth group... Verse 4 to said former church youth group (the car/bike reference is because they're all big in environmentalism and crap... the thing about everyone following "her" is after someone tried some divide-and-conquer shit, and almost had it work).

I'm working on another song, based on my favorite book, Catcher In the Rye.  Here's the chorus:

Just get me to that corner
Don't let me disappear
Feeling sicker every minute that goes by
I've only lost a part of it
Why must it go that way?
Why can't I be the catcher in the rye?

I'm still working with that a bit.
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« Reply #32 on: February 26, 2003, 09:57:15 PM »

One of my 102 songs :

With out you

Walking, thinking of my life as it is
Without you I thought I?d be lost
Not knowing if I could stand to be without you
But now I can see clearly, for what I?ve seen I going to make it through

You and I like a grand colossal tower of love
But the moment I read your testament of love, my heart sank thinking of you thereof
Its hard to believe what you want, its hard to deny my feelings for you
But now I cant try and replace you, the beauty of what was to come is gone now

Taking things for what they aren?t, I wish Id known
I was foolish to take the obvious, I wish Id have be shown, the real you
So obvious laying there, in front of my eyes
I now can?t forgive these lies
I must go out alone from now on
I must be one in myself, without you from here to the end of my time
Relying on my thoughts and my feelings
You couldn?t go there for me, neither will I ever want you too

But saying you are by yourself isn?t easy
But if we have our differences and our own ambitions then life will play out for us
For now Im letting go of your hand
And letting you go where you want to, letting you choose your fate for you
I just hope that maybe, just one time, that we could see each other again
And think, for just one second, what could have been

Losing you is like losing a part of me
When I think of how Ill be inside without you my heart begins to bleed
Im forced to let go of something I love and care for
Im forced to say goodbye to you but head for the other door
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« Reply #33 on: February 26, 2003, 09:57:38 PM »

This is one I never finished

Saying goodbye isn?t as easy as you might think
To you Im just a friend but to me your something I cant explain
When ever I talk to you my happiness inside seems to come in sync
But now that you choose to go away I can feel this bursting sorrow inside me that drives me insane

Wishing I had one more day with you
Wishing I had one more chance
Wishing I could have done the things we never go too
Wishing for one last moment to be near you

I cry to myself every night, praying that you might change your mind
But then I try to think about what?s best for you, even if that means leaving me behind
You mean more than anything, more than words can tell
But having to say goodbye to you, only begins my sad and lonely hell
No one there to comfort me anymore, no one there to smile
No one there to help through my sorrows, no one there for me for a long while
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« Reply #34 on: February 26, 2003, 09:58:01 PM »

A sappy one for a girl I know


When you see her a smile crosses your face
She brings a light to the darkness, a hope to every place
I wish that she was here everyday
I wish to hear her soothing voice, to hear the words that she?d say

All the times that I was never there
Every time that I wish we could have shared
I lost something that I wish I still had with me
I wish that I could still see her now, to she how she would be
Without Me

So great, so beautiful, so nice to hear the sound
Even if I felt high and mighty, the first sight of her would bring me to the ground
A love of a lifetime, one that I never will receive
Endless hospitality, now only her loss will I grieve

All the times that I was never there
Every time that I wish we could have shared
I lost something that I wish I still had with me
I wish that I could still see her now, to she how she would be
Without Me
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« Reply #35 on: February 27, 2003, 03:56:35 PM »

Here's something that was supposed to be a Poetic, Poe type of short story.  I never got past the first paragraph because it was too painful to write.

These past few months I have been deeply troubled
I've seen more sorrow than I have tears to drown it in
My philosophies on human nature in general and children especially
Have been challenged not by argument but by observation
Life as I thought, bears no credence in what I think
Where once I sought shelter, now I flee and shudder
When once I feared death, now I embrace an eternal slumber
To what, you may ask do I owe my deep cumber
To whom, but without tears not even a name could I utter
For the very thing that was the core of my soul
And unsuspectedly made me whole
Now wroughts the deep stark toil at the core of my soul
And in its wake, is a deep dark hole

 
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« Reply #36 on: March 14, 2003, 10:31:36 AM »

Okay, i've never posted a song on here before, so be nice, but be honest. [nervous]

It's to a very slow, repetitive, kinda creepy riff...

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Verse:
I?m all alone here in my room,
Somewhere where I can relax,
I feel like I am back in the womb,
And I can get my thoughts back on track.

In my special room, it's so cool,
A place to go that has no rules.
No need for pain and shame or fears,
A place of art and hate and tears.
I don?t wanna come out,
I could stay here for years.

Chorus:
In my special room, I feel calm,
Somewhere I can get to no harm.
And I can blow their fucking heads off,
One by one.

Verse:
Outside the people talk to you,
You ought to hear the things they say,
Those lousy fuckers have no clue,
Why can?t those cunts get out my way?
And we put up with this shit,
Day by day,
So go back into your special room,
It?s a nice place to stay.

Chorus:
In my special room, I feel calm,
Somewhere where I can get to no harm.
And I can blow their fucking heads off,
One by one,
Just put a knife in their throat,
Yeah that sounds like fun.
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« Reply #37 on: March 14, 2003, 07:05:21 PM »

 [smoking]I like the songs.... [smoking]
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« Reply #38 on: March 16, 2003, 04:59:03 PM »

               Gotta Go!


   I already knew she hated you,
   But I had no idea she hated me too!
   So i sit on my bed with my head in my hands, thinking   
   She should never ever had got the chanse!
   Then i got to the phone to call her home
   She just wasnt there

Chorus:
   So wadda ya know?Shes gotta go!
   Before she ends up beeing my foe
   She was kinda sweet and really neat
   But now shes just a fucking ho!
   She treat me like shit and now i need a hit
   But im kinda trying to QUIT!

   So I went to a friends place and finding her there
   Feet spread up high in the air
   Then i pulled out my gun, cuz i wanted som fun
   And I pointed it straight to her face

Pre Chorus:
   Shes trapped like a mouse in a maze
   I dont wanna be in her place!
   I could see the fear in her eyes
   MY GOD!shes such a discrace!

Chorus-

Pre Chorus:
   I know the guns is fake
   But i just wanna see her shake
   what happend next is i slap my fist right on his face!


Chorus-

   She gotta go! Gotta go!
   Go away! Get outta here!
   im gonna put her back!
   In the ground, where she belongs!



something i came up with while riding the bus... heard someone said, in norwegian, "i already knew she hated you"

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« Reply #39 on: March 21, 2003, 10:04:19 AM »

yo [ok] [peace]
my songs called invading me and im not going to write the lyrics but the basic idea is when a girlfriend/boyf/friend/mom n' dad gettin on to ur back and dissin u/bitchin on about u
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