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« Reply #40 on: March 23, 2003, 02:58:47 AM »

why not post this here song at HTGTH...

>>>>>

WASTED

i wanna look into
your beautiful green eyes
just once more
they'll make it seem
like i ain't so sore

i really hate to feel
kept seeing whatever i could see
i don't have any empty words for you
a very special girl

enjoy to the fullest
what you get out of life
i'd hate to see you in tears
respect the one who hears
what have i been doing all these years

i know you knew what i want
an' it aint what you need
i used to always manage
stopping myself bleed
i think i'm broken
and not gonna get fixed

we'll all see this night
that i'm thinking of
i'm smiling at you from this space
you may see the true ones
you never learned to love in life

it was us-two different wavelengths
now i'm without you here
i may be with you always right near

here's heading to another place
maybe on the day
the life i used to live
will reflect in my mother's face

check on the preceeding
please say no
but i don't hear anything anymore

maybe it's alright to waste
all this time, my time
was a waste
now i'm wasted


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« Reply #41 on: March 26, 2003, 07:19:23 AM »

Not bad guys, we could have the lyrics for one or two rock classics posted here before we know it.... [smoking]
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« Reply #42 on: March 29, 2003, 10:45:36 AM »

Heres one of for one of my friends that I used to hate.  I wrote this when I was 12 so give me a break  Tongue

  For The Love Of God
  Written By Torrey Kenakin

   

  I see the face of the person that you were
  And everyday I can tell that you never learn
  It's all inside that counts to me
  I don't understand it when you say "cant you see"
   
  For the love of god
  Spare from this s***
  You don't seem to know when to quit
  So spare me for the love of god
   
  You say that I am annoying
  Another figure for you're enjoying
  Try and see a little different than you do
  And try and make me forget what I knew about you
   
  For the love of god
  Spare from this s***
  You don't seem to know when to quit
  So spare me for the love of god

  Ooooo is a simple solution
  Not something that violates your constitution
  For you it's about yourself
  You and no one else
  Would it hurt you so much to try and help me
  But apparently it kills you to try and see things my way

  Whoa you have always been this way
  But I never wanted to see it like this and say
  "This cant be because you are more than that"
  Or so I thought
   
  (Fading Out)
  "Back Off B****
  B**** B**** B****
  F****** B****"  Wink

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« Reply #43 on: March 29, 2003, 10:47:24 AM »

Heres one about drugs in general that I wrote 3 months ago.

Look Inside   
Written By Torrey Kenakin

You say that seeing is believing
Guess you never opened your eyes
You say that time helps with healing
All those fears and lies
You that your mind has no feeling
Guess you never imagined yourself
You say that your soul keeps on pealing
Guess you should find yourself a little health

Guess you should just thinki about life
Guess you should just leave us all tonight
Guess you should've just wished it all away
Send it along, so its never here to stay
You wished it would all just go away
Sending it along, let someone else feel the delay
Look Inside

You said that the powder controlls your life
Guess you never fought back
You said it decieved all you thought was right
Guess you never wanted to get back on track
You said that it was all a game
Guess you never thought to quit
You said that it was to all to blame
Guess you never kicked this shit

Guess you should just give it all away
Guess you should just give up and pray
Guess you should've thought of a better reason
Instead of ruining your life not to blur what?s right
You wished it would all go away
Sending it along, let someone else feel the delay
Look Inside

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« Reply #44 on: March 29, 2003, 04:31:13 PM »

This isn't a war related song or anything, 'cause I wrote it long before the war shit ever happened. I got pissed off.  Whenever I'm write I'm usually pissed off.  I really haven't done any of those love type bullshit songs yet, unless they were about sex or something. I think I wrote this back in October last year.  Again, I never revised this, so I'm sure I have errors in it, or whatever the fuck, but I jut have to get down what I'm feeling first without being politically correct, or gramatically, correct,  or correct at all. Blah Tongue.

"Humanity"

I feel butterfly wings rolling about
Change has come once again
Was happy living without
Reasons to pretend
That any of this ever happened

With all these bombs blasting
Memory falls on blinded eyes,
As history goes on quietly passing
Will we take the time
To find in destruction
Peace of mind

In seven days the world had begun
One day now, for it all to come undone

Know to many people are too idealistic
I've got nobody to blame
Only try to release
Hatred through peace
For progression to ensue
People need to change

Human rights anymore so viciously abducted
Innocent people's lives destructed
Where are we going tomorrow
If we don't start today
To try to know accusing isn't the answer
'Cause the truth remains hidden
Among the many lies people say

In seven days the world had begun
One day now, for it all to come undone

It's not about love
It's not about complete unity
It's about respect
For one another's humanity
How are we to see
How things will be
If we aren't the ones to start
Talking less with our heads
And thinking more with our hearts

Everyday we move less in the same direction
But farther and farther apart
It's not about who's right or wrong
It's about whose willing to make a difference
Somebody's got to be humane enough to start

Some time is never time enough
If you've got the time enough to be understanding
Have the compassion enough to love
'Cause the whole world dies
Looking through the eyes
Of destruction and hate
We all see the corruption of power
Will we see the power of peace
Before it's to late

In seven days the world had begun
One day now, for it all to come undone

It's not about religion
Its not about how things should or shouldn't be
It's about a better today for a brighter tomorrow
It's only about humanity
How are we to see
How things will be
If we aren't the ones to start
Talking less with our heads
And thinking more with our hearts

I wonder if fighting is the only thing these children know
But if they are the providers of peace for tomorrow
Shouldn't we allow them the necessary tools to grow
'Cause if warfare is all their  innocent eyes see
Will they know enough to look deep down in there soul
To find that it doesn't matter what other people believe
That it all has to start in everyone of our hearts
The error of our ways we must see
Today is soon going to be tomorrow
Our own selves we must learn to follow, peacefully

'Cause it isn't about hate
People's undecided fate
It isn't about conformity
It's about you and me
Living together in unity
Showing one another
The power of humanity


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« Reply #45 on: March 29, 2003, 07:42:20 PM »

Okay I actually worked on this. I really don't know what it is, because I'm sure if I wanted to I could make it into a song. I don't know what the hell I was thinking when I wrote this and really has no train of thought, or a point at the end. The title has really nothing to do with the song. The only difference between this song and many of the songs posted on here, it's not about a break up, or being pissed off.

"Tripping"
by Ambur N.

Tonight I'm leaving,
this dead end town.
Going to Las Vegas,
to live underground.

So I'm walking down,
this long, long road,
my feet, they're screaming,
to lighten the load.

I met a transexual,
who lived on it's knees.
It had three parts,
a life, a love and a right to be free.

I continued on walking,
as the sky, it grew dark.
I was tired and weary,
so I stopped at a park.

I saw a man with a guitar,
he told me a million myths,
with his sad, dirty songs,
and old Led Zepplin riffs.

I decided to move on,
because the sky grew dim,
I stopped to watch a rape victim,
learn how to swim.

A man stopped,
and asked me for the time,
I said sorry sir,
but I do not have a dime.

He smiled, then waved
as he walked down the street,
tommorow had come,
and I hadn't missed a beat.


If you seen my last song I posted on here, this is a BIG improvement. So, I'm proud of this one and don't steal it. Though I don't know why anyone would want to. Oh and sorry if you were offended (my mom was).
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« Reply #46 on: March 30, 2003, 05:11:27 PM »

 Smiley well i didnt see your last one, but i think this one is very good, well done.
i've decided to not write a song of my own, but instead to make teeny weeny alterations to one already released. i've chosen 'how do i live?' by leanne rimmes. read it! i think it sounds much better now  Grin

How do you live?


How do you get through a night without me?
If you had to live without me,
What kind of life would that be?
Oh you, you need me in your arms, need me to hold
I'm your world, your heart, your soul
If I ever leave, oh baby I would take away everything
Good in your life, and tell me tonight...

How do you live without me? I want to know
How do you breathe without me, if I ever go?
How do you ever, ever survive?
How do you, how do you, oh how do you live?

Without me, there'd be no sun in your sky
There would be no love in your life
There'd be no one left for you
And you...Oh baby I don't know what you would do
You'd be lost if you lost me
If I ever leave, oh baby I would take away everything
Real in your life, and tell me tonight...

How do you live without me? I want to know.
How do you breathe without me, if I ever go?
How do you ever, ever survive?
How do you, how do you, oh how do you live?
Please tell me baby, how do you go on?

If I ever leave, oh baby I would take away everything.
You need me in you, oh baby don't you know that I'm everything
Good in your life, and tell me tonight...

How do you live without me? I want to know
How do you breathe without me, if I ever go?
How do you ever, ever survive?
How do you, how do you, oh how do you live?
How do you live without me?
How do you live without me, baby?
How do you live?
How do you live without me?
How do you live without me, baby?


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« Reply #47 on: March 31, 2003, 03:40:43 PM »

Man, you guys like inspired me to write songs, so now I have like.. 10. The one I'm sharing though, is actually kinda funny, because theres a member on the board (??) who has this name. It was written by me and my freind Liam.

"Fifth of Whiskey"
by Ambur Nolan and Liam Deranum

I'm looking for some inspiration,
for this song of mine,
I've got, two fifths of whiskey,
and a bottle of wine.

I've got this girl,
sprawled out on my bed
she's begging for a pill,
for the ache in her head.

Chorus:
Lord have mercy,
God bless my soul,
I'm only 23,
but I'm much too old

The rain pours down,
as the day rolls on,
I've got a fifth of whiskey
and a hit of a song.

The licks and the songs,
they just repeat,
like a shirt on my back,
and shoes on my feet.

Chorus

For some reason I think a girl should sing this song. (Most of my songs are written for a guy to sing.) If I ever find a girl to sing it, I'll probably change the words.
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« Reply #48 on: March 31, 2003, 08:57:31 PM »

This is one of my poems.  It sucks.  It's kinda mellow, moody, and depressing.  I was feeling really sad, violated, and lost when I wrote it.  It's really simple, the meaning is very simple, but the meaning can be interpreted in many different ways.  It was just one of those things you carry like a ton of bricks on your shoulders.  Just had to get all of it out Cry.

"NoBody"

Look at me
See who I turned out to be
Realize that in these eyes
Lies a person who is nobody

I once believed in dreams
That nothing is as hard as it seems
Than conscience came and redeemed me
From the person I believed I could be
And took me away from what I believed to be true
Found in my head a somebody suffocated dead
A person I once thought I knew
Though my eyes realize
The lies that before they couldn't see
Yet just another broken down person
Who would always be nobody

I saw your face today
Unlike all the others
Yet hauntingly the same
Your eyes visualized
All the pain I felt eternally
Struggling to find inside of yourself ~ Anybody
A hopless mind traced in remnants of the past
Dwelling over the person you would never be
Together for a second we were one
Though we were nobody


Okay, I feel really naked right now.  Like this is the most personal thing I've ever shared with anybody ever.  
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« Reply #49 on: April 02, 2003, 03:43:56 AM »

This is one of my poems.  It sucks

no it doesn't! it's very touching and my personal favourite of the ones that have been posted in this thread. not many people seem to give feedback to this stuff. i don't usually, but that's not to say i dont like the other stuff, do, but i felt i had to reply to this one because i love it

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« Reply #50 on: April 02, 2003, 04:09:25 AM »

Same Story... Different Bitch


I'll tell you a little story  
'bout a girl I knew,  
she was one of a kind,  
maybe one of the few  
 
I told her that I want her  
and she said that she loved me,  
then she fucked me in the ass  
and she said "You're history"  
 
CHORUS:  
Same story, different bitch  
she might not be a preacher but she's got the right to preach  
Same story, different bitch  
The girl is screwed, you just got fooled and now she's out of reach
 
 
Some people said she was the one,  
with whom I'd get along,  
and others said she's just a fuck,  
that bitch is just so wrong  
 
I never listened to the ones  
who said she was a bitch,  
and it was motherfuckin' late  
when I found she was a witch.  


Repeat Chorus


I really fell for every line  
she said to me that night,  
and when she stopped I fingered her  
and then turned off the light  
 
 
I didn't think that it would last,  
it went on for three years,  
but then the bitch turned on her switch  
and left me back in tears  
 
This song I sing to you right now  
is based on a true story,    
It really happened years ago
but you don't have to worry  
 

Cause many people cum  Wink and go  
but I went down in glory,  
I wrote this song forgot the bitch  
but I have to say I'm sorry  
 
I should have mentioned her real name    
when I started this song  
So you won't fall for the same game  
and stay where you belong  


Her name was... fuck that, no more lawsuits for me bitch...


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« Reply #51 on: April 02, 2003, 04:10:28 AM »

Here Today... Gone To Hell

I'm doin' time
because I stole
because I stole
a fuckin whore

I fucked her twice
but never paid
and all she said
was "man You're great"

unfortunately
her pimps were there
they beat me up
it was unfair

They kicked my ass
inside a cell
was Here Today
But Gone to hell...

(fast guitar solo)

I had this girl
so fuckin cute
to me she was
the sweetest fruit

but then one day
got back from work
to find her with
my mate - that dork

she said it's not
just what you think
she felt misunderstood
like Pink

The point is
you can never tell
you're Here Today...
but Gone To Hell...
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« Reply #52 on: April 02, 2003, 04:11:18 AM »

I listened to my God tonight
He couldn't tell what's wrong from right

He knows he fucked up with this world
He thinks he might be getting old

He tried to save me from my sins
To save us from our kings and queens

And then He tried to cure my pain
But in the end He called me insane


Chorus:

It's needless to lie
It's needless to cry
It's needless to try
And fall from the sky

It's needless to say
You'll do it your way
When all you can do
Is shut up and pray


2nd Verse:

I listened to my God tonight
But couldn't help Him end his fight

He said that people shouldn't die
By all those guns they had to buy

He tried to talk me into church
He said "Believe but never search"

But He could see inside my eyes
I knew my truth, I knew His lies...

Repeat Chorus x 3

Closing:

I listen to my God sometimes
Because He always stops my crimes...


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« Reply #53 on: April 02, 2003, 04:11:57 AM »

All of my secrets,  
And all my goodbyes,  
All of my dreams and thoughts,  
Are trapped in your eyes

Everything that I used to know,  
And all that I don't,  
Maybe I'll show you someday,  
And maybe I won't

Chorus:  

But whatever happens,
You should know,  
That I love you still,  
And time will never change,
The way that I feel

Baby believe me,  
Believe that it?s true,  
I never needed anyone,  
The way that I need you

2nd verse:
I'm lost without you,  
Lost in daylight,  
I gotta find you,  
gotta have you tonight

All that I ever wanted,  
And all that I need,  
Was you to stand beside me,  
Without you I bleed

Repeat chorus x2

(music fades out)

(starts again in another tempo, kinda faster but not so fast...)

This was my story,  
My truth in one song,  
I never lied to you,
But I admit I was wrong

Whatever happened to us?  
Where did we go?  
I wish you?re still happy girl
And just want you to know

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« Reply #54 on: April 02, 2003, 02:02:16 PM »

I wrote this last night.  It's kind of weird I guess, but I don't follow any type of format or whatever when I write. I just write what I feel.  This sort of has double meanings.  It's about leaving your past behind, but it is also about leaving behind people who bring you down in life.  It's one of the more positive songs that I've written [ok].

"Leaving Town"

Childhood came and then went
On the outskirts my life was spent
Don't have the time to worry about that anymore,
You know things turn out in the weirdest ways
As much as I don't want to leave, I can't stay
But things just aren't like they were before.

Leaving this town behind
Walking away for the last time
Know in the back of my mind
Everything will end up fine
When I leave...leave this town behind

The sun on this long day has finally set
Still this life I'm living isn't over yet
I know so many things I don't want to know,
The night has come to steal the pain away
It will be back again with the break of day
When light shines on the memory of why you had to go.

Time is supposed to heal all wounds
I hope it will heal this one soon
'Cause I can't bear to live anymore with this pain,
Life keeps going on
Experience and mistakes keep making me strong
In life you always have to be willing to change.

Leaving this town behind
Walking away for the last time
Know in the back of my mind
Everything will end up fine
When I leave...leave this town behind

The road up ahead looks long and winding
Looking into the unknown is blinding
But there's something new always to be found,
So I'm picking up and going my own way
In this place I can no longer stay
Today is the day I'm leaving this town.

Thanks for your nice comments before tim Kiss
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« Reply #55 on: April 04, 2003, 01:54:57 PM »

yep!  [ok] another very good one hip, it holds together very well. the only problem i have with it is it's positiveness, lol. depressing poems are better, methinks.  here, have a kiss in return  Kiss
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« Reply #56 on: April 16, 2003, 09:34:47 PM »

This is a really weird song I guess.  I was really uhh fucked up when I wrote it, so it's positive and depressing at the same time.  It's a "fuck you preppies" song.  Rock 'n' fucking Roll dudes Grin

"One Day I Went Psycho"

Never said any of the things I needed to say
So none of you heard the things I wanted you to hear
But I don't give a fuck about what you think of me today
There's nothing about any of you to fear
You've all been officially declared dead
I've massacred all of you in my head
I'd forgotten for such a long time
How fun it was to play
Took me a long time to find myself
Until I went psycho today

You take so much
Until you can't take anymore
You never fight
For any of the things worth fighting for
You get lost in the stampede
By people desperate to be in the lead
Up until now I pretended that things were okay
Until I went psycho today

Became sick and tired
Of you treading on my territory
So what was once yours
Now belongs to me
Why should I even care
About people who never give a shit about anybody else
Life's so unfair, don't expect me to share
An ounce of information about my true self
I used to give a fuck
Until I realized it wasn't worth it
And that I had been put through to much
To even begin to give a shit
This life is one big price
To damn high to pay
Sick and tired of being in debt
Until I went psycho today

You take so much
Until you can't take anymore
You never fight
For any of the things worth fighting for
You get lost in the stampede
By people desperate to be in the lead
Up until now I pretended that things were okay
Until I went psycho today

So many voices
Screaming constantly
I have conversations with them all the time
What else am I supposed to do
When I am all alone in my mind
To the other side I've finally gotten through
Never thought I would be able to find the way
But everything became much clearer
Once I went psycho today


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« Reply #57 on: May 12, 2003, 05:24:50 PM »

How can happy memories make you sad?
Thinking of you used to make me glad
Why did it have to end so bad?
I know, you gave all you had
But I wanted more and what for?
Now I?m alone, drinking, thinking
Sinking down into my bed
With all the voices in my head
Not knowing what to do
Cause I have nothing without you

Since that day you left, I?ve been on my own
Lived my life alone
Searching for a place called home

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« Reply #58 on: May 13, 2003, 06:11:39 AM »

Grain of the Sea (by Redolance) [drooling]

Love is a grain of salt lying in the sea
crying for independance
the waves keeping her.

She is a shout of joy, cry for victory,
and a lustful occassion.
Love is a grain of salt lying in the sea.

Sometimes her voice is herd while
standing near the streets
the waves keeping her.

She is murdered with insults, boastings,
a laughter during recognition.
Love is a grain of salt lying in the sea.

She is a light to see with at night,
a warm breeze giving blooms in the Spring
the waves keeping her.

She smiles in innocents, benevolent
like rythm to a beautiful song.
Love is a grain of salt lying in the sea
the waves keeping her.



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« Reply #59 on: May 13, 2003, 06:14:31 AM »

How can happy memories make you sad?
Thinking of you used to make me glad
Why did it have to end so bad?
I know, you gave all you had
But I wanted more and what for?
Now I?m alone, drinking, thinking
Sinking down into my bed
With all the voices in my head
Not knowing what to do
Cause I have nothing without you

Since that day you left, I?ve been on my own
Lived my life alone
Searching for a place called home



Even though most of your lyrics remind GN'R songs, I must say that it reminded me of my current shitty situation...

Good one dude...
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