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« Reply #480 on: February 04, 2007, 01:44:34 PM »

Thanks Journey. I've actually got a lot of them, but I'm not sure if they're any good. I did write this one that I thought was pretty good..

What does she mean to me, the question was posed
Is she your sunrise or a beautiful rose
Is she the reason for the smile on your face
Is she the season for the time of your place
And if she is, then tell me why
Too many times you made her cry

Too many times, I don't know why
Too many times I made you cry
The life you always wanted, I just couldn't live
The love you always gave, I just wouldn't give
I don't have a reason, and I don't know why
Too many times I made you cry


I really like that one too. It's beautifully pensive.


I sometimes tend to worry if my writing is good enough. But if writing frees whatever is locked inside and moves you in some way, then that's what it's about. If I'm writing and wonder what someone else will think of it, I just wanna stop, because it's not really about them at that point. If that makes any sense.
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« Reply #481 on: February 05, 2007, 07:33:43 AM »

Give me back my gloves
because I need them
Because it will be cold without
Insert nonsense rhyme here

Oh Gloves, I miss you so
I am almost getting my mental health questioned
Atleast I have got my muscles made in plywood
And a tubesock in finest barbed wire

I am raped
You are raped
We can rape together

Like a clown in the sun
I spread my wings and dig a hole
because the time has come
to infiltrate the superbowl

face it, place it, and freebase it
karate, kungfu, i kick you

karaaaate is the total solution
lets all bow to the total solution
also known as Boba
karate the solution!

I wrote this song in 1976 when I was staying at a hotel named "Jamba Rest".
It became a huge hit, and I have performed it live ever since.
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« Reply #482 on: February 22, 2007, 04:24:35 PM »

                                                                                   ARBEIT MACHT FREI


That star above the poor, ever
gleaming, with magnetic turbulence
pulls on a peasants pence and
smiles at the sound of creaking hinges.

Oh, the walls that suspended danger,
now scream a noose's tale, found
hanging from a tap, tears parrallel
to the drip.

A theme park? A place of fun,
attracting many, as the band played
on. Symbols crash to smother those
silent and sacred sounds. Symbol crash.

The birds now conserve their chirp,
they are German birds after all.
Both Genius and faith failed.
They got their "dues".



this is a poem which i completed last month. It is of course about the final solution and the peoples reaction to Auswitz as a tourist destination.

I am not anti-semitic, I just love anti-semitism.
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« Reply #483 on: March 05, 2007, 12:27:21 PM »

 peace


My dreams are me and when I return
I will be free to dream again


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« Reply #484 on: March 07, 2007, 05:14:19 PM »

Here's some lyrics I just wrote. It's a work in progress:

You know I know when you're
feeling the way out.
I know you see what it's like
And then you
See the shielded eyes
Looking for an escape
You know I see the resistance?.
There's no way out.

You see what is seen
And I know just what's wrong
You know I know what must be done?
And now you
Know what must become
Of futures darkly turned
And I see what you see
And you see, that's no way to go.
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« Reply #485 on: March 08, 2007, 09:17:53 AM »

Here's some lyrics I just wrote. It's a work in progress:

You know I know when you're
feeling the way out.
I know you see what it's like
And then you
See the shielded eyes
Looking for an escape
You know I see the resistance?.
There's no way out.

You see what is seen
And I know just what's wrong
You know I know what must be done?
And now you
Know what must become
Of futures darkly turned
And I see what you see
And you see, that's no way to go.


Interesting EFish.

I like the "that's no way to go".     peace
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« Reply #486 on: March 15, 2007, 01:50:49 PM »

O baby, take some time
Take as much as you need
And it?ll work out fine

Yes you?re troubled past
Will haunt you again
But we?ll always be here
Because you?re our friend

We can help you through it
We understand your mood
We?ll make sure your path is lit
And we?ll do all we should

Because we?ll be here forever
Just standing by your side
Our love you just can?t measure
That?s a truth that will never die
Coz you?re the one that means so much
And makes us feel alive
It?s undeniable that we love you
Coz our hearts aren?t ones to lie.
 

When you call for help
Or cry in pain
We?ll come running
Over and over again

Because you?re a beautiful angel
That?s fallen from the sky
We?ll take you troubled wings
And help to teach you to fly

Because we?ll be here forever
Just standing by your side
Its undeniable that we love you
Coz our hearts aren?t ones to lie
Don?t feel the need to pretend
Because everyone?s allowed to cry
And we?ll be here to catch you
When you?ve fallen from the sky


Not completed and some bits need ironing out but i like it anyway
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« Reply #487 on: March 20, 2007, 10:27:22 AM »

O baby, take some time
Take as much as you need
And it?ll work out fine

Yes you?re troubled past
Will haunt you again
But we?ll always be here
Because you?re our friend

We can help you through it
We understand your mood
We?ll make sure your path is lit
And we?ll do all we should

Because we?ll be here forever
Just standing by your side
Our love you just can?t measure
That?s a truth that will never die
Coz you?re the one that means so much
And makes us feel alive
It?s undeniable that we love you
Coz our hearts aren?t ones to lie.
 

When you call for help
Or cry in pain
We?ll come running
Over and over again

Because you?re a beautiful angel
That?s fallen from the sky
We?ll take you troubled wings
And help to teach you to fly

Because we?ll be here forever
Just standing by your side
Its undeniable that we love you
Coz our hearts aren?t ones to lie
Don?t feel the need to pretend
Because everyone?s allowed to cry
And we?ll be here to catch you
When you?ve fallen from the sky


Not completed and some bits need ironing out but i like it anyway

Inspiring!
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« Reply #488 on: April 04, 2007, 07:38:17 AM »

"ACID EXHAUST"

Can't you see what those things did to you? Can't you feel toxicity on your mouth? Can't you hear these guys screaming? Damned acid exhausts...
Can't you see how this was getting worse? How this is going to be destructed? One by one everyone will fall, damned acid exhausts...

"FUELSTROM"

Fuel, so much for a journey, and then you'll understand that your fuel will never be enough to live, you'll depend on a machine feeded by acid Panasonic batteries, you'll understand that this is the new century's storm.

"THOUGHTS (SIX HOLES ON YOUR BACK)"

What the fuck are you thinking right now?
You fucking come to me, you get off your damn car and OH SHIT! Shoots!
Six - Bullets - DAAAAMN!
What the fuck are you thinking right now?

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Those are three weird lyrics written by me...don't look at the fact that they're short...for the group I have those lyrics are long enough...

EDIT: I found also this one, is about the first thoughts about my new classmates:

"RIGHTNESS"

They're all very friendly
I thought they wasn't even like these
They're all very friendly
That sounds good

I think he smokes too much
Lucky Strike, Camel, Nazionali
I think he smokes too much
I think I'm right

I think she do feels lonely
'cause of that behaviour with us
and of that sad subnick
I think she do feels lonely

I think I drink too much
and I smoke too much
'cause everyone says that to me
I think they're right

I think she's my best friend
'cause of our behaviour
the lonely one
I think I'm right

They're all very friendly
I thought they wasn't even like these
They're all very friendly
That sounds good

I think we do too much chaos
everytime we do too much chaos
I think we do too much chaos
Damn right

When he tells what he thinks
there's always a silence
no one speaks
damn right

Everyday for her's a torture
everyone wants to have her for himself
I think she do feels tortured
I can understand her

In the end
I'm glad of my changing
it's a new experience
I'm glad of meeting them.

Thank you
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« Reply #489 on: April 05, 2007, 05:20:06 AM »

This one?s for the loser

With no intention
Of restoration
You showed up smiling
Few nights ago
Without confession
Or explanation
You just expected
I?d go along
But things have changed
Or so it seems
Since you?ve been cleaning
Your way with grins

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you?d be my hero
You?re nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin? loser


Two wasted years
Of lust and fears
With wicked lies
And hurt goodbyes
Too many nights
An empty bed
Waiting for you
To ring my bell
I had to move
On with my life
Out and away
This endless strife

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you?d be my hero
You?re nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin? loser


I was too willing to believe
That without you I couldn?t live
And  how you trained me well to that
Comings n goings killed my trust
Stupid excuses I won?t buy
Now you can?t look me in the eye
To me that?s all that?s left of us
Some nasty pain in the ass


With no intention
Of restoration
I have to tell you
I can?t forget
No hesitation
Or explanation
Kick in the face
That much you?ll get
Cause things have changed
Or so I tell
Since you?ve been turning
My life in hell

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you?d be my hero
You?re nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin? loser

I say a total fuckin? loser...


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« Reply #490 on: April 05, 2007, 10:12:32 AM »

This one's for the loser

With no intention
Of restoration
You showed up smiling
Few nights ago
Without confession
Or explanation
You just expected
I'd go along
But things have changed
Or so it seems
Since you've been cleaning
Your way with grins

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you'd be my hero
You're nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin' loser


Two wasted years
Of lust and fears
With wicked lies
And hurt goodbyes
Too many nights
An empty bed
Waiting for you
To ring my bell
I had to move
On with my life
Out and away
This endless strife

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you'd be my hero
You're nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin' loser


I was too willing to believe
That without you I couldn't live
And? how you trained me well to that
Comings n goings killed my trust
Stupid excuses I won't buy
Now you can't look me in the eye
To me that's all that's left of us
Some nasty pain in the ass


With no intention
Of restoration
I have to tell you
I can't forget
No hesitation
Or explanation
Kick in the face
That much you'll get
Cause things have changed
Or so I tell
Since you've been turning
My life in hell

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you'd be my hero
You're nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin' loser

I say a total fuckin' loser...


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now thats from the heart maybe you should send that person the lyrics or sing them outside thier house, just make sure the parents dont have a bucket of water
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« Reply #491 on: April 05, 2007, 01:03:40 PM »

^^Hahahaha, anythinggoes! Yeach, maybe I should do that!!  Kiss
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« Reply #492 on: April 05, 2007, 06:55:07 PM »

This one?s for the loser

With no intention
Of restoration
You showed up smiling
Few nights ago
Without confession
Or explanation
You just expected
I?d go along
But things have changed
Or so it seems
Since you?ve been cleaning
Your way with grins

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you?d be my hero
You?re nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin? loser


Two wasted years
Of lust and fears
With wicked lies
And hurt goodbyes
Too many nights
An empty bed
Waiting for you
To ring my bell
I had to move
On with my life
Out and away
This endless strife

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you?d be my hero
You?re nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin? loser


I was too willing to believe
That without you I couldn?t live
And? how you trained me well to that
Comings n goings killed my trust
Stupid excuses I won?t buy
Now you can?t look me in the eye
To me that?s all that?s left of us
Some nasty pain in the ass


With no intention
Of restoration
I have to tell you
I can?t forget
No hesitation
Or explanation
Kick in the face
That much you?ll get
Cause things have changed
Or so I tell
Since you?ve been turning
My life in hell

Came knocking on my door
A beggar, not a chooser
Went crawling on the floor
Too careful, nasty cruiser
Came creeping in my bed
My cute, congenial bruiser
You said you?d be my hero
You?re nothing but a zero
A mystified abuser
A total fuckin? loser

I say a total fuckin? loser...


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I like it. Good one ok
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« Reply #493 on: April 06, 2007, 02:06:51 AM »

Whispers

Don't let the river hold you back again
Don't let the river hold you back my friend
Yeah don't let it drag you down once again
Don't let the river hold you back my friend

Help me to see, help me to crawl
Help me to strive, help Peter Paul
Help me to love, help me to care
teach me to sing, and I'll always be there

Don't let the river hold you back again
Oh no no no no no no
Don't let the river hold you back my friend
Oh no no no no no no
Yeah don't let it drag you down again
Oh no no no no no no
Don't let the river hold you back my friend
Oh no no no no no no

I dream this song all day long
And all the ways I get it wrong
So dream your song
Right those wrongs
And be the one who gets along

I can't stop going
I can't stop going x3

Don't, don't you walk away
Don't, don't you wanna see the day x4

You walk away whenever I say
all the things that should be that way
I know what you want to be
It's what I want to see

So don't ever ever wa-wa walk away
Don't ever ever ever wa-walk away
Don't ever ever sto-stop stop talk to me
Don't ever stop ta-ta-talk ta-ta-talk talk to me

Don't let the river hold you back again
Oh no no no no no no
Don't let the river hold you back my friend
Oh no no no no no no
Yeah don't let it drag you down again
Oh no no no no no no
Don't let the river hold you back my friend
Oh no no no no no no

D and I are finishing this song.? It should be done soon, I'll release it then!? beer
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« Reply #494 on: April 06, 2007, 04:05:07 AM »

This one?s for the loser

With no intention
Of restoration
..........
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I like it. Good one ok

Thank you very much, Vicious Wishes  Smiley
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« Reply #495 on: April 14, 2007, 09:11:34 AM »

O baby, take some time
Take as much as you need
And it?ll work out fine

Yes you?re troubled past
Will haunt you again
But we?ll always be here
Because you?re our friend

We can help you through it
We understand your mood
We?ll make sure your path is lit
And we?ll do all we should

Because we?ll be here forever
Just standing by your side
Our love you just can?t measure
That?s a truth that will never die
Coz you?re the one that means so much
And makes us feel alive
It?s undeniable that we love you
Coz our hearts aren?t ones to lie.
 

When you call for help
Or cry in pain
We?ll come running
Over and over again

Because you?re a beautiful angel
That?s fallen from the sky
We?ll take you troubled wings
And help to teach you to fly

Because we?ll be here forever
Just standing by your side
Its undeniable that we love you
Coz our hearts aren?t ones to lie
Don?t feel the need to pretend
Because everyone?s allowed to cry
And we?ll be here to catch you
When you?ve fallen from the sky


Not completed and some bits need ironing out but i like it anyway

that was so fucking great dude
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« Reply #496 on: April 14, 2007, 11:26:13 AM »

This ones more sombre, its about heart ache and such... (first verse i'm not too proud of but its there anyway)

Love is divine Its chosen by God
Still I acted so foolish
Like a man standing in a lighting storm
Holding a metal rod

How couldn?t I see
That I was about to get burnt
All the mistakes I made
I guess I still haven?t learnt
And this is the price I?ve paid

Loving a girl who will
Never return the feeling
She still doesn?t know
That I?m not even close to healing

I still dream about you
Every night
I never want anything
Blocking my site
Just a vision
Of that perfect view
That consists of nothing
But the beauty of you
Sadly it?s a dream
That will never come true
I love you more than
You ever could have knew
But you?ll never love me
No matter what I do

There?s no simple cure
Just good actors
A broken hearts a syndrome
And everybody suffers
The only cure for loneliness
Is being with people who care
All the people I can be with
No-one has the love to share

When it comes to love
I?m always out of luck
When it comes to my heart
God doesn?t give a fuck

Stuck in this love
In which I surely lie
Slowly I find myself
Starting to cry

And theres nothing
That can help me
As i watch my dreams
Being carried out to sea

Now I find my self
Wading out
Waist deep into
That sea of doubt
Trying to fix my head
But it feels like my boots
Are slowly turning to lead
Now I'm struggling
I?m trying to swim
Trying to save my head
But sadly its pointless
Coz my boots are made of lead.
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« Reply #497 on: April 14, 2007, 12:21:46 PM »

chineseroses, you're really good at this
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« Reply #498 on: April 14, 2007, 12:24:53 PM »

Thanks man, i'm just glad people like them.
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« Reply #499 on: April 15, 2007, 01:49:05 PM »

i so many lyrical ideas that i just think of at work... ill jot some down. they are a little shit comparted to most of these but hey...its a laugh
i have song lyrics but do not know here they have disapeard to lol

these are just random lyrics i think about at work if you wana add feel free

you know i take advantage of girls who fall to their knnes
cuz ya know the ones i pick aim to please
it aint easy livin on the edge

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Quiet in a house of terror
the smile on my face tells ya i knew better
lifes torn and trashed
cuz that girl had too much too soon
had ta get out the room
living on the edge of a dream
life crashed down and it wasnt as it seemed
but i know ill be moving on

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i dont fear nothing
cuz im outa control
dont confront me
or doubt me
cuz ya know im on a roll

__________________

iv seen her in positions no1 has seen
yeah i gotta say that girl is exclusice to me

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grab you're throat wana rip iut out
make you scream and shout
you caused so much pain
you drive me insane

______________

its now or never
ya gotta find that feelin
that gets ya on the ceelin
white substance
or brown
ya know you hate to come down

__________________-

never touched by love
till that girl came along
one night stand gave me the upper hand
till she realed me in like the god's of sand

______________________

she comes a runnin back
i can tell ya that girls slack
walkin in the rain
that girl gotta be insane
on the corner
flags me up
you knew she was going down
never to return til my gun wasa cocked
lick of her lips we got rocked

__________________

have no time for rehab
workin 9 till 5  take up all you're life

________________

come in her face
rember the place
where we all go
now is the time
you wish you were mine

______________________

it easier to distroy than create
when you're face to face
with the one you hate

_____________-

ill steel you're girl who used to be mine
she's been arounnd

_____________

someones life flashes before my eyes
before my soul drifts and dies

_________________

you aint worth another second of my life
so im leaving you behind

_____________________

why is this world full of shit
just takes one chav
to throw a pucnch
after just one hit
im you're worst nightmare
iv had ten hits
and you know im here

________________

true lies are the games you play
when you cant just get up and walk away

_________________

if i find out the truth
you better trade some truth
cuz i found it harder
since the day i met you
you're lies and dceit
will be to you're defeat
ya know the silent man
does all that he can
to come out better
than he went in
and i will curse you're religious sin
 we knew it was wrong
so i had to write this song
this day had to come
but now all said and done
i knew id be the only ome

left standin
.....
ya shoulda left you're ass in bed

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children of ectasy

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when you're gone chaos will come again

____________

im a bad boy rage machine
fuled by you're gasoline

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addiction is a state of mine

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when my life stares at me i dont know who im supposed to be

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everythings writeen
if only we could read it

rember these are just thoughts at work.....not to serious...dont beat me lol....im having a cancer stick now...toook a long time to write this lol

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