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« Reply #60 on: May 13, 2003, 08:08:05 AM »

The Meadows of Seeking (The Call of the Torn)

Life is a shadow
benevolent
Father who
roams with
destruction,
your finger
upon the iniquity
of children.
I sit in the
meadows
of seeking,
my heart
a dark cloud
ready to
rain, wondering
an occassion
without marvel,
but the harp
mustn't play
its song
of riddles
that trumpets
calling for
devils.
I look to
see the trees
shaking in the
wind, its
whispering vocals
accusing.
The fowl and
all creatures
that crawl
said to me staring,
"Our hearts
lye in our
keeper's hands."

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« Reply #61 on: May 13, 2003, 11:06:24 AM »


Differnt style every day
Short skirt, long jacket?
It works, either way

Fresh, shaved and clean
It?s Friday night
If you know what I mean

It?s this girl I know
With a heart of ice
And eyes just as cold

She takes her money before she goes
It?s just business she says
And everybody knows

Not looking for love, just some fun
If she would
I?d guess she?d run

It?s this girl I know
With a heart of ice
And eyes just as cold

Drinking beer and smoking pot
It?s her way to laugh a lot
Or maybe not?

Live fast and die young
It?s the only way
And she really gets some

It?s this girl I know
With a heart of ice
And eyes just as cold


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Sweetness is a virtue
And you lost your virtue long ago
You know I'd like to hurt you
But my conscience always tells me no
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« Reply #62 on: May 20, 2003, 12:16:21 PM »

hey,

we play guns covers in and around bristol (UK) as well as our own stuff - ill try n get a guns cover uploaded, but for now here's a song of ours called 'changing tides' :

http://www.inextremisonline.co.uk/In%20Extremis%20-%20Changing%20Tides.mp3

Hope you like it.
Please give feedback - rip it apart, we need all the criticism we can get as we're recording four new songs in two weeks time.

Thanks,
Bob

p.s. our website has another track on the main page called 'innocence' which is more rocky, and u can download changing tides there too if the link above fails : www.inextremisonline.co.uk

Here's the lyrics:

Something's hurting in my side
I've been caught in the changing tide
All I ask of you is to remain true to me
Cause I'm lost in the growing sea

Hey you there with the broken soul
Your eyes are sad but your standing tall
It's up to you I'm sorry, please make it through
Hey you there with the scars in your eyes
Listen up I won't tell you twice
I'm in the way, I need you

When I wake up I see the sun, but it is burning me
When it pleases something is left undone, so tie it up now

Hey you there in the black disguise
Your naked thoughts light up the skies
It's time to see the truth, please make it through
Something's hurting in my side
I've been caught in that changing tide
It's up to you I'm sorry, please make it through.

When I wake up I see the sun, but it is burning me
When it pleases something is left undone,
So tie it up
So tie it up
When I wake up something is left undone,
So tie it up
When I wake up I see the sun is burning

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« Reply #63 on: May 20, 2003, 12:20:04 PM »

that doesnt seem to work - try this direct link:

http://www.gnr.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/inextremis/In%20Extremis%20-%20Changing%20Tides.mp3

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« Reply #64 on: May 25, 2003, 06:27:05 AM »

hey, im kinda new to heretodaygonetohell.com..and iv just seen this msg board. hope u like my stuff! (btw, they're copywrited, so dont be naughty! [ok]

Spanking Monkeys

Get your whips out
and lets begin
into your PVC now
aint it fun to sin
feel the pain
it's kinda nice
I'm getting off
I spank you twice
I'm not too sure
ir it's right for kids to see
do you think it's wierd
I'm spankin a monkey?

I've always had a fetish
for things that you'd find sick
for instance screwing dead people
that's where I get my kicks
their rotting corpses
can't complain
so I pump them harder
I'm an attraction for the insane
I'm not too sure
if it's right for kids to see
do you think it's wierd
I'm abusing a dead body?

...hehe, it's not finished yet, but what do you think!?
before you ask, no I don't spank monkeys, and I don't abuse corpses... Wink
tell us what ya think
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« Reply #65 on: June 03, 2003, 05:36:25 PM »

 [hihi] i like it
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« Reply #66 on: June 03, 2003, 09:27:50 PM »

This is from a few years ago.  I think if I remember correctly I wrote this when I was 14 or 15, and came to the realization that men are assholes.  It's a "men suck more balls then I ever will song".  Sorry to all the few good men out there, you know me still luv ya's [love] Kiss [love]


"Just Like a Man"

Pushed down
Shoved away
Looking around
For the right words to say

You open your mouth
Only to blow out hot air
Then looked surprised and confused
When you find out I don't care

Isn't it just like a man
To never completely understand
Isn't it just like a man
To make numerous unreasonable demands
Isn't it just like a man
To never give a damn
Aren't you just another typical man

Your ego encompasses you fully
There's no way around it
Can't see through to the otherside
I keep on slipping away bit by bit
'Cause you claim to have big balls
But then you don't use them
So I'm convinced that yours are really small
Just like most mens

Isn't it just like a man
To never completely understand
Isn't it just like a man
To make numerous unreasonable demands
Isn't it just like a man
To never give a damn
Aren't you just another typical man

Is it really that hard to be thoughtful
Is it really that hard to have feelings you share
What is so wrong with giving out reasons to like you
Why now should I even care

Was it all to get me into your bed
Did you imagine the sex would be great
How long did it take you to realize...
You can't use your DICK as bait

'Cause I have a tendency to reel people in
And then spit them back out
Without even giving it a second thought
Or having an ounce of doubt

Because when you hurt my heart
Then there's nothing else I would rather do
But rip out your heart out
And hurt yours too

That's not being insensitive
That's not being unfair
That's reciprocating
The only feelings you knew how to share

Isn't it just like a man
To never completely understand
Isn't it just like a man
To make numerous unreasonable demands
Isn't it just like a man
To never give a damn
Aren't you just another typical man

Isn't it just like you to be another typical man
Who will keep on trying...but will NEVER understand

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« Reply #67 on: June 11, 2003, 11:50:08 AM »

This is from a few years ago.  I think if I remember correctly I wrote this when I was 14 or 15, and came to the realization that men are assholes.  It's a "men suck more balls then I ever will song".  Sorry to all the few good men out there, you know me still luv ya's [love] Kiss [love]


"Just Like a Man"


i like it... men are pricks at the best of time.

Your ego encompasses you fully
There's no way around it
Can't see through to the otherside
I keep on slipping away bit by bit
'Cause you claim to have big balls
But then you don't use them
So I'm convinced that yours are really small
Just like most mens"

oooooh, yeah  [hihi]

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« Reply #68 on: June 22, 2003, 04:08:16 AM »

This is a short poem I wrote about my first love.

Hey, Michael
I've been loving you since I was riding a tricycle
and when I got a little older
you were the only one that could make my stomach flutter
and melt my heart like butter
you're my castle in the sky
my only wish
my sweet piece of pie. [love]

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« Reply #69 on: June 22, 2003, 10:32:26 AM »


I'm still trying to search
Why am I trying?
Why doesn't it emerge?

Looking at the clock,
time is what it takes
Holding thorns or releave,
what difference will it make?

Sitting here looking at my hands,
wondering....
what makes them shake?

Still searching my way,
hiding myself behind my guitar...

When will I find this stain?
Why is it so deep inside my heart?
Will the strings release my pain?


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« Reply #70 on: July 13, 2003, 01:06:01 PM »

Heres a song i wrote for my band

My funeral

Written by Certaxe

Enter the black hardened door of the yard
in witch a coffin is in the ground
as its lowered you and others weep
why oh why do you weep for me?

koruz--
Im dead ha ha ha ha ha ha
and this is my funeral
I watch forever i must
from ashes to ashes
from dust to dust
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Why cry for me?
I bury for fate in this Earth
<<solo MANIFESTO>>
No no no no no no
Never shall I rise again
Nailed into my coffin
never to rise
oh why do you weep?
(rep K)

<<solo MANIFESTO>>
Lower in the ground
6 feet under rotting flesh and bone
this is my fate
<<solo Holly>> - &&to fade&&
<<solo MANIFESTO>>
"He must not rise again"
but ill sleep here until the day
the nails they rust and my body raised
ill find you and give you
<<Solo MANIFESTO>>
My fate
(Rep K)

Raised, ill be the king of pain
my past life obsolette
a walking blastphomy
ill be true sacrilige
I rape the priestess
I am coming
<<solo Holly and MANIFESTO>>
I am coming for you
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« Reply #71 on: July 15, 2003, 04:21:26 PM »

I've written a few songs, but they were all really slow ballad/dirge type things (although better than the song below).  I mean, some of them sounded pretty cool and artsy, but I wanted to try and write something with a little more balls, more of a rock 'n' roll song.  The best I got was a stupid KISS-type song that originated just from my thoughts of wanting to be a rock star.  Anyway, tell me what you think.  By the way, it's not a finished song, more just like random scribblings.  But I want to see if I should bother continuing and working on it.

Working titles - ROCK 'N' ROLL DREAMS
                      -  SEX, DRUGS, AND ROCK 'N' ROLL

I was a high school loser
Til we started that band
The key to heaven was
The guitar in my hands

A hundred sweaty clubs
And a thousand sleepless nights
At the end of the tunnel
I see my rock 'n' roll light

I wanna be...a guitar hero
I wanna be...a star, not a zero
I wanna watch my dreams unfold
I want sex, drugs, and rock 'n' roll

That's all I've got so far.
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« Reply #72 on: July 15, 2003, 04:28:05 PM »

This is from a few years ago.  I think if I remember correctly I wrote this when I was 14 or 15, and came to the realization that men are assholes.  It's a "men suck more balls then I ever will song".  Sorry to all the few good men out there, you know me still luv ya's [love] Kiss [love]


"Just Like a Man"



Being male, obviously my opinion is going to be biased.  But I just thought it was interesting to note that if I were to write a song like that about women, I would be branded a sexist, misogynist pig.  I gotta confess, when I hear women talk like this about men, it makes me want to just crank up Use Your Illusion and blast a little "Back Off Bitch".  But if I put all that aside, I think that your song is actually pretty good.  I mean, it's angry, but it does feel like a SONG, not just a lot of complaints.  Almost something you might expect from Axl Rose or Eminem if they were women.  So I'll give it a thumbs-up.  [ok]

Er...by the way, is there any truth in the belief that women always go for assholes over "nice guys"?  That's just the way it seems to me.
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« Reply #73 on: July 29, 2003, 10:18:32 PM »

If you men are "offended" by my diatribe concerning the opposite sex, switch the word "man," with "woman," tinker with the verses a bit, and there ya go.

When I wrote this, I wanted to rant and rave and get shit off my chest, yet still keep a universal feel to the thing as well, be it a woman, or a man, could relate to it in the end.

It's one of those, go fuck off and get as far away from me as humanely possible type of songs.

Yeah, I wasn't really in the most pleasant of moods when that one got written. If nothing else it was a great venting moment.

Cheers boys [beer]!!!
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« Reply #74 on: July 29, 2003, 10:59:51 PM »

is there any truth in the belief that women always go for assholes over "nice guys"?  
Always.  Women will tell you until their pretty little faces turn blue that they want nice guys, but who do you actually see them dating?  The assholes!   Tongue
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« Reply #75 on: August 01, 2003, 08:23:58 PM »

is there any truth in the belief that women always go for assholes over "nice guys"?  
Always.  Women will tell you until their pretty little faces turn blue that they want nice guys, but who do you actually see them dating?  The assholes!   Tongue

   I will have to agree with you on this one Dizzy.  So many women are gluttons for punishment.
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« Reply #76 on: August 01, 2003, 10:15:34 PM »

    **abhorrent**            ......'copyrighted'
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I DON'T NEED YOU,NEVER SURE I DID
FUCK ME OVER, TOO MANY TIMES TO COUNT
I BLAME ME
I LET YOU IN AND YOU USED ALL THE THINGS I SAID
MADE THEN YOUR OWN, BELIEVED IT WAS YOUR DUE
YOUR DAY IS COMING MAN....
RETRIBUTION IS AT HAND
I AM FERMIUM,CLOSING OUT YOUR LIFE
BITTER?NEVER, PAY BACK IS A BITCH
AND I HAVE YOU IN MY SIGHTS
ONE FLICK, ONE FINGER, I'LL ALL BE OVER
TOO EASY...I WANT YOU TO FEEL
LET THE PAIN SPEAR YOUR SOUL, RAPE YOUR HEART
JUST WANT TO GIVE A LITTLE BACK
LISTENING TO LOVE SONGS TO STOP THE BLACK
TURN THE CLOCK BACK
JUST TO WHEN I DIDN'T HATE
IT'S TEARING ME APART
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« Reply #77 on: August 05, 2003, 02:46:40 AM »

"Buried Treasure"

Bare hearts and souls
Stripped clean of feeling
Wounds and scars have made us who we are
Though we refuse to let bygones go perchance of healing
Why drown in a past
That will refuse to change
Forsaking the future
And placing upon it  blame

Empty buckets we will fill
Full to the top with so many things
Acting as treasure chests
Holding the many gifts life brings

It must all be buried treasure
That I can't seem to find
I've looked high and low
And just about everywhere you could possibly go
But have reached the end of time
Never did I take a moment to see
The person it was inside of me
Or spare a dime for a piece of mind
The buried treasure has been
Locked within me all this time

If I'm granted the privilege of seeing tomorrow
Will I only be wasting my chances living off of yesterday's sorrows
I've learned the hard way that time isn't something you can just simply borrow
But something that is gone before you even know the path you want to follow

Full buckets we will empty
Overflowing to the top with so many things
Discarding our treasure chests
That hold the many gifts life brings

It must all be buried treasure
I've looked everywhere for it
But to it I must be blind,
I've searched high and low
And everywhere you could possibly go
Yet never took the time to look for it inside.
Could you spare me a dime
So I could buy a piece of mind
In hopes of finding buried treasure
That I've desperately longed to find
'Cause never before could I see
The person who was inside of me
Before I reached the end of time
We all must be like buried treasure
That none of us ever find
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« Reply #78 on: September 06, 2003, 01:05:26 PM »

I wrote this song initially because I'm kind of a skinny guy, and people don't think I can do anything, but I was trying to write about how there's a lot of anger lurking beneath the surface and I can do a lot more than you think.  The lyrics are pretty stupid, because it kind of devolved into a song about killing someone and having revenge, which isn't really what I want to write about.  But anyway, here it is.  It's very influenced by Kill 'Em All-era Metallica, after I learned how simple the words to "Whiplash" were.

"Vengeance Is Mine"

You may have thought you knew me,
Thought I couldn't hurt a fly
Looks like you thought wrong, punk
'Cause now you're gonna die
Pompous little bitch
Thought you were really tough
Maybe you'll think different soon
Because now I've had enough

(CHORUS)
Paper tiger's papercut
Doors of fate are slamming shut
Had enough of being kind
Now your life is out of time
VENGEANCE IS MINE

Run pig, run
I'll let you set the pace
You won't stand a chance
When fate wins every race

(CHORUS)

Watch you may, your own morality play
See the villain meet his end
And to all those that would cross me
Heed this warning that I send

(CHORUS)
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« Reply #79 on: September 15, 2003, 12:33:58 PM »

"Wasteland"         (Copyrighted)

It's a cold night here in my corner of the world
The wind howls as mournfully as a lone wolf
Crying out with all the essesnce of it's lonely soul
To the absolute nothingness that surrounds him
The emptyness............

It's a cold night here on my mountain
The stars shine down as boldly as precious gems
Sparkling with all the hopes of one's imagination
With all the dreams that may come true
They are so far away..............

It's a cold night here on my island
The ocean roars as deeply as thunder
Sending wave upon black wave crashing onto these shores
With a vengefull wrath unrivaled by our own mythical Gods
The turmoil..............

It's a cold night here in my wasteland
The ground is as barren as the face of the moon
Eternally frozen like Dante's hell
With all the comforts of a bed of nails
I think of it as home.............

EDIT: I guess I should copyright this huh?.........Ok......
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