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« Reply #520 on: March 18, 2008, 02:51:16 AM »

^U need to start a band dude! ok
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« Reply #521 on: March 18, 2008, 04:25:13 AM »

^U need to start a band dude! ok

I'm working on it Cheesy
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« Reply #522 on: April 13, 2008, 02:22:16 PM »

I wrote this about 1 month ago and have just finished it with my band and it came out fucken awesome, just like i visioned it. Ill upload an Mp3 done on a home recording setup if anyone cares enough. But heres the lyrics, hope u like,,,let me know...

normal = verses
italics = bridges
Bold   =  Chorus
underlined = fillers
>>>>>> = if the note is held and for ruff time


?POWERS THAT BE?
By Mark Scott


(hard rock style)

v1
In a world of misconceptions
In a world of fucked up times>
In this world we love to hate
We?re  going out of our minds >
It?s the weight on our shoulders
It?s under pressure we crack
the constant search for answers
keeps the monkey on my back

v2
Im just trying to understand this lifetime
But all around me is the blind leading the blind
I just wanna give something back to mankind
Hey whats the point, i wish i could hit rewind

So where's the......justice in life>>>
Guess I?ll have too...take up the fight>>>
No fairy tale off your TV screen
It?s your own damn war, battle hard, find your dreams>

Or you?ll
Be brought down by the powers that be>      
They push and they pull till your down on your knees>
Crying out for help, oh how could this be>>
I?ve been brought down by the powers that be>

v3
I?m just trying to find my way
Just asking for an even break
Gotta get a little fuel for the flame
Do all I can to put an end to the pain>

So where's the......justice in life>>>
Guess I?ll have too...take up the fight>>>
No fairy tale off your TV screen
It?s your own damn war, battle hard, find your dreams>

Or you?ll
Be brought down by the powers that be
They push and pull till ya down on ya knees
Crying out for help, oh how could this bee>>
I?ve been brought down by the powers that be

They are? the powers that be
They take? whatever they need
They walk all over you and mee
cause they r the powers that beee>>


Guitar Solo

So where's the......justice in life>>>
Guess I?ll have too...take up the fight>>>
No fairy tale off your TV screen
It?s your own damn war, battle hard, live out ya dream>


Dont cha
get beat down by the powers that be
No doubt about it, its no conspiracy theory
Crying out for help, oh you can?t even see
I?ve been brought down by the powers that be
Ive been brought down by the powers that be
No doubt about it, no conspiracy theory
Crying out for help, oh you can?t even see
I?ve been brought down by the powers that be

Fuck them, Fuck the Powers that be
Fuck them, Fuck the Powers that be
Fuck them, Fuck the Powers that be
Fuck them. Fuck you, Fuck me


end

Let us Know what ya think, we wont be putting our album together till august so if anyone thinks sum things could do with work let me know and maybe adjust it in sum way, shape or form..

 Thanks Mark
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« Reply #523 on: April 13, 2008, 02:27:58 PM »

by the way SIN CUT, nice song mate. its hell funny but only last week wrote and are working out intrumentals now to a song thats main chorus line is
Crash...N Buuurn>>>
I Crash...N buuurn>>
I crash...N Burn>>>>
am i ever gunna learn
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« Reply #524 on: April 15, 2008, 07:42:31 AM »

by the way SIN CUT, nice song mate. its hell funny but only last week wrote and are working out intrumentals now to a song thats main chorus line is
Crash...N Buuurn>>>
I Crash...N buuurn>>
I crash...N Burn>>>>
am i ever gunna learn

Thanks mate. Please do post mp3:s about the song you wrote  ok
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« Reply #525 on: April 23, 2008, 10:56:58 AM »

are u guys ever scared that ya stuff is gunna get ripped off by some low life who cant write lyrics. thats why the song i put up is done and our bands.  I really wanna share my stuff with u guys even ta get a taste of the response even b4 my band mates do. Thats my only fear, i guess if we wrote it here its dated and on paper so to speak..

what do u all reckon, is it a sinicle way to look at things or just know that they can steal if they want but in the end they r fooling themselves and the world we see what fakes they r.  I know its more than lyrics to be a great band but lyrics are a huge and probably the toughest part.
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« Reply #526 on: April 24, 2008, 12:32:02 AM »

sounds a bit paranoid mate  ok
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« Reply #527 on: April 24, 2008, 11:23:20 AM »

i guess but people are such assholes in this day n age. im not sayin this board, im just saying in the world. Hell a fully catch chorus can be easily the key to a song and imagine tryin to prove to a multibillion dollar industry when your noone that its yours and someone stole it. id beat there skulls in, my lyrics are about me. I lived them. yeah i am paranoid, its a big deal in  this nasty world.
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« Reply #528 on: April 24, 2008, 01:46:58 PM »

I once asked a lawyer about lyrics, or texts in general.

Protected or not, what he basically said, was that an unknown author ( or musician) should get their work stolen, for two reasons :

When you can prove you wrote them ( easiest and cheapest way, send yourself a sealed envellope with your lyrics inside, date them and sign, and NEVER open the envellope unless it's for court), you go to court, you win, you get financial damages.

Reason n?2 is that you get exposure.

Dixit the lawyer.
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« Reply #529 on: April 25, 2008, 12:38:43 AM »

When you can prove you wrote them ( easiest and cheapest way, send yourself a sealed envellope with your lyrics inside, date them and sign, and NEVER open the envellope unless it's for court), you go to court, you win, you get financial damages.

Why not just get a copyright on the text? It's easier than all that mailing stuff.
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« Reply #530 on: April 26, 2008, 03:05:01 AM »

When you can prove you wrote them ( easiest and cheapest way, send yourself a sealed envellope with your lyrics inside, date them and sign, and NEVER open the envellope unless it's for court), you go to court, you win, you get financial damages.

Why not just get a copyright on the text? It's easier than all that mailing stuff.

simply because it's cheaper, some people don't have nough money to regularly pay to protect.

For example :

Every text i protect as an author costs me 30 euros.
And that's JUST for france.

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« Reply #531 on: April 26, 2008, 10:52:19 PM »

When you can prove you wrote them ( easiest and cheapest way, send yourself a sealed envellope with your lyrics inside, date them and sign, and NEVER open the envellope unless it's for court), you go to court, you win, you get financial damages.

Why not just get a copyright on the text? It's easier than all that mailing stuff.

simply because it's cheaper, some people don't have nough money to regularly pay to protect.

For example :

Every text i protect as an author costs me 30 euros.
And that's JUST for france.



Wow, that's expensive. In India it only costs around $5 to register a copyright and it's valid for 60 years. No problems.
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« Reply #532 on: April 27, 2008, 04:34:27 AM »

copyrights here vary in terms of time, you ca nfind 5, 7, 10 years protections. After that time, you have to renew.
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« Reply #533 on: May 01, 2008, 05:50:22 AM »

This is something I wrote...I'd appreciate your opinions, thx.


Crimson (missing colors)

I thought I got it done
but I'm far away from home
I wanted to fall in love
but I ended up all alone
nobody knows me in my town
but everybody wants to put me down
this song might never dissapear
but you may forget it in two years


 **chorus**

my life must have been interrupted in the making
missing colors in my painting
...Crimson




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« Reply #534 on: May 01, 2008, 03:05:09 PM »

Great lyrics man!
Specially the 2 sentences at the end
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but you may forget it in two years
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« Reply #535 on: May 14, 2008, 12:24:43 AM »

are u guys ever scared that ya stuff is gunna get ripped off by some low life who cant write lyrics. thats why the song i put up is done and our bands.  I really wanna share my stuff with u guys even ta get a taste of the response even b4 my band mates do. Thats my only fear, i guess if we wrote it here its dated and on paper so to speak..

what do u all reckon, is it a sinicle way to look at things or just know that they can steal if they want but in the end they r fooling themselves and the world we see what fakes they r.  I know its more than lyrics to be a great band but lyrics are a huge and probably the toughest part.


Very paranoid

I never post lyrics...... very very rarely but I definitely dont post any of my A+ material. U can never be too careful.
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« Reply #536 on: September 23, 2008, 01:15:16 AM »

I've written another poem for Axl. Only wish he could read these. They come from the heart.

Sadness and agony inspire my thoughts,
My mind is like the sea
Rolling and swirling around
drowning with thoughts of you.

What provokes my intense desires?
Your smile;
like the first light of day.
Your face;
like a drink when I?m dying of thirst.
I drink until drunk.
Your lips like a
drug I take and take;
Until I can take no more.
Your voice
Pierces through my heart
straight to my soul.

I give myself to you;
My heart is yours to keep
And my eyes are the window
Look into them to see
What love lies beneath
Look, look deeply
Never look away.

The weight of this racks
My consciousness;
If only I could repent
A relentless struggle repeats
I have a never-ending desire for you.
All reasoning has been revoked,
Any acceptance of defeat rejected.

I struggle to forget; I try but fail;
You?re melted into my heart and mind
A part of me for eternity
I catch my breath; my heart hesitates.
I close my eyes to see you again.
Only then can I sleep.


ag 2008

soo..

you got some kind of an obsession for him?
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« Reply #537 on: September 23, 2008, 09:26:46 AM »

not exactly the reaction I was hoping for, but I guess should have been expected. Lets just say he inspires me. I wrote these about him, so I guess I am a little preoccupied with him. I wouldn't say obssessed. If you read the poems carefully, I acknowledge this is fantasy that will never come true.  Smiley
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« Reply #538 on: September 26, 2008, 08:32:37 PM »

Seriously, Axlover,  these are NOT the writings of someone with a normal interest/attraction.

Get yourself psychiatric help ....FAST!!!
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« Reply #539 on: September 26, 2008, 08:58:28 PM »

Axl is my inspiration, but the poems are exagerated for impact. I do not live my life for him nor do I dream of him every night. Have you ever read poetry before? I'm sure you have. Do you think that everyone who writes of unrequited love and angst needs help? Sorry you got this from my poems. They are supposed to make you feel something, not make you want analyze the writer's intentions.
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