lyrics, opinions wanted.?

[AUSTRALIAN_TSUNAMI]

Standing at the edge of this limitless ocean
Struck down by the wonder that I see,
Watching as the time passes you by
Looking for the answers, waiting for the sign 
Maybe it?s a waste of time; maybe it?s the journey that was meant for me
Maybe this was meant to be


I?m just a prisoner of my own mind
Seemingly Trapped form what I?m sure
No bridge could cover these seas
No boat could stand these stormy seas

A prisoner on my private island
With just this fire to keep me warm
But such a lonely home
Seemingly no way home
A pointless hope

I hear their voices; it?s a strange sensation
It?s a scary time, there the ghosts I find
The demons that hold my hand
Walk me into the storm


Watching as the lighting cracks over the shore
Standing thinking this can?t be all
I?m just looking for a friendly hand
Where?s the halo saving this man
Looking for a peace of mind, a place to rest my eyes
Someone to share

Wish you were here, a friendly hand 
It?s not the way I?d pictured it?d be
This wasn?t meant to be; no, no not for me
It?s this land it corrupts the man 
No, no, it?s not for me
It?s not the way I?d pictured
It?s not the way home
It Corrupts the man

[Shirell]

Honestly, not bad at all.  Got a melody?

[AUSTRALIAN_TSUNAMI]

Honestly, not bad at all.? Got a melody?

you know i do lol.

[Shirell]

Can I hear it?

[Mom]

Pretty good, I'd be curious to hear it as well. Very, very Estrangedesque.

[MCT]

Cliche and angst-ridden...

...good for you! That's where it all starts...

[sucker punch]

coool